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[kleinmeli]

Hey you all ^_^
I’m a newbie here and a newbie in writing HP fiction.
Therefore my story isn’t perfect or anything, but I thought posting it here wouldn’t hurt me…at least I hope so *laughs nervous*

But enough with my babbling…here you go!

Title: SuffocationRating: R

Comments

[dacro]

yeah! keep it going!
The emotions are perfect. I loved the idea of the "ball of light", and want to know more!

If you want to catch the few spelling things, put ot a request here for a beta, and you'll be all set!

Welcome, by the way! :D
~J~

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[kleinmeli]

Wow...you think something in my story is perfect *cuddlesyoutodeath*
and yeah I will search a Beta reader for me ;)

Thanks for the welcome...I'm feeling like home already *hihihi*

Meli

[malc_hppixels]

ohhh please keep going, it is so good, I want to read the next chapter bursts into tears please please please please please please please please and please

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[kleinmeli]

Please don't cry!!!
I'm working on part 2 and it's nearly finished!!!
*petsyourhead*