5120: Harry Potter's Godmother - Cassandra Pendragon

[pottersues]

The story would make more sense if it didn’t pick up towards the end of The Order of Pheonix. Or maybe not, given this is a Mary Sue we're talking about.
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Title: Harry Potter's Godmother

Perpetrator: StarDust188

Sue-O-Meter: Toxic

Cover/Banner Art: None

Summary: “…What if Lilly also had a best friend, knowing Lilly she most likely had alot more sense,

Comments

[auregan]

Wow, what a traumatic way for Harry to meet his previously dead... now undead... godmother. Also, in the most confusing way possible. At least Rowling introduced Sirius as Harry's godfather in a way that made sense

[pottersues]

That would definitely be interesting if done right.

[anonymous]

The summary has poor pronoun usage. Is it implying that Lily didn't have a lot of sense? I know we didn't get to see a great deal of her, but she never struck me as someone lacking in sense.

I would think that either your animagus form and your patronus are the same or they are not, so how come Harry gets a special form but no one else does? And Harry doesn't strike me as the stallion type. He's nimble and quick, and stallions make me think of freedom, something Harry doesn't strike me as symbolic of.

People in fiction sure see a lot more in people's eyeballs than I do. I guess I didn't inherit that ability. Beauty like a veela...but more real! And she can just take over the Ministry of Magic because of her family name. And she's just so perfect and amazing and beautiful and smart and powerful and -- Whoops, there go -my- eyeballs, right across the state line I rolled them so hard. Guess we're done here until I can pop them back in.

[darth_gojira]

Classic, CLASSIC Mary Sue right here.