5123: Tournament of the Gods - Percy Jackson, Amelia Bones, Mad Eye Moody

[pottersues]

The fandom that comes in second regarding what fandom are crossed over with Harry Potter on the pit just so happens to be Percy Jackson and the Olympians which has over 3.5k in crossovers. I’d originally planned on doing just one entry and moving onto the next fandom, but there were actually three stories which stood out to me the moment I clicked

Comments

[auregan]

To start off with, I hope that the author is in a better place with their writing and confidence. It seems that they were burnt out and they didn't even make it to their first anniversary of being on FFN. I haven't checked out the rest of the author's fic, but it seems that they really did go into these stories without really a plan and published hot off the press work instead of really giving any thought into their plot and what direction they wanted to go in

[pottersues]

I hope so as well. Having looked at their profile, they're actually super stoked about one of their stories which they've gone back and edited but for that one they admit to taking definite inspiration from another fanfic writer which resulted in them coming up with effectively a major brainstorm for a story which is honestly a good thing.

[anonymous]

This POV narration doesn't feel like Dumbledore. Admittedly, I'd imagine writing from Dumbledore's POV would be difficult; I've never tried it. (In fact, I've only written Dumbledore once, and it was actually his painting). It feels both like he's a manipulative!Dumbledore (what with him being annoyed early in the sample; that feels out of character) but also regular Dumbledore (what with him immediately going to Percy's aid). It could definitely be worse, though, so I'll give the writer credit for that