5125: Harry Potter, Squatter

Jan 26, 2022 21:28


And here is the third I found.


Title: Harry Potter, Squatter

Perpetrator: Enterprise1701-d

Sue-O-Meter: Awful

Cover/Banner Art: None

Summary: “…Based on a challenge by Gabriel Herrol. A young Harry Potter is abandoned in new York by the Dursleys. He finds his way onto Olympus and starts squatting in an abandoned temple...”

Full Name: Harry Potter

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rating - awful, p - sue what plot? swp, jr - guardian (protector of some kind), stu - harry potter, p - crossover

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anonymous February 22 2022, 17:28:57 UTC
Vernon is a big man. He doesn't need to bribe seven-year-old Harry's passport off him. Unless Harry suspects he's going to be left behind in America, would he really be that careful about keeping it somewhere his uncle couldn't find it? Why, if Vernon didn't want Harry to have his passport, would he have given it to Harry in the first place? He's a seven-year-old; Vernon could reasonably just keep it on his own person except when Harry needs to present it to get into the country. Admittedly, I have never left the US, so I suppose the process could be more complicated than that...but I doubt it. And either way, if the Dursleys are this cruel, why bother keeping their word about giving Harry money for his passport? Is seven really old enough to understand how crucial it is to keep one's passport in a foreign country? I have so many questions about this single plot point ( ... )

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