1652: Forever young - Hermione Granger
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Edit: Because many of you are whining, I put the descriptions under a cut. Please forgive me for being detailed and through in sporking an 18 chaptered fic. I sincerely hope that the calamity of having to read so many sentences has not ruined your enjoyment of pottersues. Next time I will be sure to include as little as possible. /bitter
TITLE: Forever young
PERPETRATOR: eMmIe .xx
SUE-O-METER:
(toxic)
FULL NAME: Hermione Granger
SPECIES: Witch
HAIR: straightened with a "ghd". I don't know what a "ghd" is, but I'll ask my hair stylist. "she had dyed it blonde with pretty golden highlights and she had used some better hair products so her hair wasn’t frizzy and gross anymore."
EYES: not mentioned, wtf?
MARKINGS: "curves in all the right places" with "ample breasts", white teeth, and she is "stunning". She wears makeup:Diagon Alley:"Hermione put on Maybelline Dream Mouse foundation in Ivory, then Maybelline pink blush, a coat of Loreal Telescopic Mascara, black Rimmel eyeliner (but not too much coz she would look like some emo freak), and some Maybelline Shiny licious lip gloss in Cola float." and "a 3 step skin routine using some new Clinique products so she didn’t have any pimples". Red Outfit: "Maybelline dream moose foundation in Ivory, then put on some red Chanel lipstick, some Loreal Telescopic Mascara, and she warmed up her face by sweeping on some Revlon powder Blush in Naturally nude". Day After Sexing Draco: "Maybelline dream moose foundation, a swipe of Loreal Telescopic Mascara, Maybelline wet shine diamonds lipgloss in Rhinestones, and a little bit of Napoloen Pardis eyeshadow in coral spice with a sweeping of pink Maybeline dream Matte Moose". Yule Ball: "Maybelline Dream matte mouse in Ivory and loreal Telespopic Mascara and added a bit of sparkle to her eye makeup this time - she had just ordered some of revlon’s limited edition collection off the net so she applied sum Revlon Molten metal Liduid Shadow in bronze bomber to her eyelid. She also swept some Pout concealer under her eyes to make them look extrabright, [...] some black liquid eyeliner by Chanel and drew a pretty 60s “cat eye” style (A/N: uno… the one that flicks upward it lookz super cute), On her lips she wore her absolute fave lip gloss from Victoria’s secret - sweet talk in dark pink." The Day After Draco Crucios Her: "Rimmel concealer on the dark circles under her eyes, a coat of Loreal Telescopic Mascara and her 2nd fav lipgloss, Maybelline Shiny licious lipgloss in Cola Float".
POSSESSIONS: Lots of money her family inherited from "Uncle William", a computer, tons of make-up and clothes.Clothes: "denim mini from Abercromby, a blue sequined halter top from J Crew, some silver sequined Versace stilletos", "leopard print panties" from Victoria’s Secret, "a purple Aeropostale dress that was low cut with a push up bra (A/N: not that she needed it wink) with a Buirberry printed jacket and Docl and Gabbana stilettos", "a pink silk Victoria’s Secret nightgown", "a short red J Crew skirt, an Abercrombie and Fitch denim jacket, cherry print Keds, a Dior top that had Dior across the front in red letters", "hot pink lacy thong and matching hot pink lacy bra. (Both from Victoria’s Secret)", "a blue velvet Moshino dress that had dark blue and pink flower all over it and also had white trim. She also wore a dark blue delia’s jacket and on her feet she also wore Moshino cheap & chic hot pink sequined heels. Over the top she wore a rainbow star-print scarf from Gap and a leather American Eagle belt", "a beautful midnight blue cocktail dress from Armani exchange" that was her grandmother's, "metallic silvler heels by Hermes with diamond encrusted ankle straps", "a blue Delia’s t-shirt, American Eagle skinny jeans and cherry Keds", "Forever 21 denim skirt, which was already very short, Aeropostale white blouse, which already had around 6 buttons undone", " a white J Crew tank top with red beads around the collar, a red Tommy Hilfiger cardigan, white lacey Wet Seal shorts, Just Cavalli red ballet flats", "a cobat blue bra and pantie set with black lace trim", " skimpy black lace nightgown for her, and some even skimpier lingerie - a tiny bra that showed masses of cleavage and a g-string", "a black JCPenney skirt that was so short it was practically a belt. Under that she was wearing fishnet stockings and knee high Versace boots with a massively high heel so she was struggling to walk. On top she was wearing a low cut leopard print halter top from Aeropostale with her black lacey Victoria’s Secret bra showing". "she got $500 pocket money every week. Also, her American friends FedExed her about 4 or 5 new outfits (including shoes) every month."Objects: "a silver Tifanny’s necklace and matching bracelet and ring", diamond earrings, "Mercedez Benz which was silver and had a black striped down the side", "sparkly hair clips and she had Chanel logo earrings in her ears with real diamonds. She also wore a solid gold chain that her mom had got her for Xmas and carried a Louis Vutton hang bag and matching luggage bags", a "peach colored cashmere blanket and matching pillow", Sue-friends from her old school - Tara, Nat, Fi, Lauren and Stephyy, "a Chanel charm necklace and some solid gold rings on her hands, [and] 24 carrot gold hoop earrings", " a really pretty red flower clip from Girl Props" for her hair, "a denim Doony and Burke handbag with a mauve Chanel lambskin key chain attached to it", "a pair of light blue Marc Jacobs sunglasses", a "pale pink headband from Girl Props", " small quilted Chanel bag with a dainty little silver chain", "a black spotted headband", "a red Juicy Couture bag".
ORIGIN: This was an extra credit assignment because the Suethor was failing English. Her bff told her that what she wrote is fan fiction, so the Suethor decided to post this online. It features Makeover!Hermione who is destined for not-a-jerk!Draco. She was only nerdy and smart because she wasn't happy with who she was. After she discovered the person that she wanted to be, she turned into this vapid piece of crap.
CONNECTIONS TO CANON: She drives to Diagon Alley to meet up with Harry and Ron. They are amazed with her transformation. Harry and Ron have changed too, they are both toned and tanned. She wants Harry to like her so she does the most un-Hermioneish thing possible, she drops a book so she can bend over to show him her panties. Draco sees this and whistles at her. Then he tells her that she's hot. Hermione flirts back at him. Harry and Ron turn on Hermione, and she lies to them. She said that she was actually being sarcastic. Being the morons that they are, Harry and Ron accept her excuse. She gets her own carriage on the Hogwarts Express. It serves "field mushroom fried in butter and garlic on a salad and on a slice of sourdough bread. On the side there was a little bowl of tomato slices and chunks of feta cheese. Also there were a few slices of bread with some freshly made butter, [... and] a pitcher of water, a glass for the water and a glass of champagne too." and has a bellboy that "looked exactly like Channing Tatum in the movie Step Up (A/N: omfg… HOTT!)". Her carriages also has a couch and a TV with cable. This means she gets to watch "her 2nd fave show - America’s Next Top Model!" Draco shows up and asks why Hermione is in his private carriage. Apparently Draco always rents this carriage, which does make any sense whatsoever. In the first two minutes of their conversation, he tells her that he has never really hated muggle-borns, and that he never will. He then promises her that he will never make her cry again. Using a microphone, Dumbledore announces that Hermione and Draco are Head Girl and Head Boy, despite the fact they are in fifth year. Draco congratulates her and kisses her on the lips, in response she "tongue kisses" him back. For some reason, this kiss is projected on a big screen in the Great Hall. Harry and Ron freak out, so Hermione fake-rejects Draco at that moment, and then Dumbledore says: "There is a new rule being implemented that the head boy and head girl have to sleep in the same bed!" This is the stupidest thing I have ever read. Although all they have done is kiss, she sees herself as Draco's lover. Stressed, she goes on to MSN to chat with her Sue-friends. Draco reads the conversation over her shoulder, then they unknowingly cuddle in bed. When she becomes Draco's Potions partner, she decides to follow her love, and ignore Harry and Ron. So she does what she does best, bend and snap! This is used as an excuse to show off her "hot-pink thong". He tells her that he'll meet her in the bedroom, and she loses her virginity to him, "it was the best time of her life". The next day Adam from Durmstrang arrives (in exchange for Neville), he looks like "Adrien Grener in Entourage (A/N: my fav show ever so hott…)". Hermione and Draco decide to have him be in their group. Adam and Hermione make out at the storage cupboard, when she realizes that she loves Draco, and not Adam. She runs back to Draco, guiltily. Then, one day in the prefects bathroom, Adam joins her and they start having sex in the giant tub. Draco catches them. Adam apparates away, and Draco destroys Hermione's wand and Crucios her. Then he apparates away, also. In the Hospital Wing, she tells everyone that her injuries are the result of her fooling around with her wand in the bath. She begs Draco to forgive her, but he won't. They go to Hogsmeade, and Hermione gets drunk. There is a "Bachelorettes Auction" and Draco buys Pansy. He is very turned on by her stripper-dancing abilities. Pansy ends up cheating on him, and does cocaine at the Slytherin table. Hermione throws up and passes out. The last person she sees is Draco. She wakes up in the Hospital Wing, and finds out that no one likes her anymore, and they think she is trashy. She decides she needs to feel loved, so she hits on Blaise. They have some fun in a broom closet. Then she needs a book to study from, but Adam has it. In exchange for the book, she has sex with him. She thinks Hagrid is gross, but runs away to his hut. In the hut, she watches Legally Blond on his TV. Snape catches her and tells her that she is going to be expelled. She has a meeting with Dumbledore which boils down to this: "Wtf is with you and Draco?” asked Dumbledore. "for every other year, you have come up to my office and been like omg, Draco just called me a mudblood. So why are you pursueing a romance with him?" He is about to expel her, but she tells him that she will do anything to stay. He lets her stay if he gets to have sex with her. She rejects him and then he rapes her. She tells her bffs, and they tell everyone. This means that Dumbledore gets arrested. She gets expelled, because she did break the three strikes rule before. Then the story ends. I am sure she is going to reunite with Draco.
SPECIAL ABILITIES: Hates studying, "She liked to hang out with her Muggle friends, go to the mall, IM and go on Myspace just like a regular girl." She is trying to get back to her Muggle roots. She can drive, despite being fifteen, because "she had a special wizard license so the cops couldn’t pull her over".
NOTES: At first, I'm not going to lie, it had a trollish-vibe, but then I ruled that out. Because I know I'm going to get a bunch of comments going: "How is this not a troll??" and "Please let it be a troll." I'm going to state again that this is not a troll. The Suethor has a profile, has favorites, and has left reviews in other stories. This is just a case of someone who should be on Quizilla posted their story on ff.net instead. It's just a case of lazy-authoritis. The A/Ns before and after the chapters are horribly written, in comparison to the chapters themselves.
SAMPLE:
With every name that Professor Snape read out, Hermione’s heart sunk lower. She didn’t want to be Draco’s lab partner. She didn’t want her love to get the better of her again.
“Lavender Brown and Seamus Finnigan on Bench 6. Luna Lovegood and Blaze Zambini at Bench Seven. Gregory Goyle and Lucy Ferguson on Bench 8. And finally…” Hermione’s stomach dropped. “Our Head Boy and Head Girl, Draco Malfoy and Hermione Granger on bench 9.”
Suddenly Hermione knew. She had been thinking about her feelings for Draco for a few days now and she had come to a decision. She would forget Harry and Ron and just go for it, follow her heart. She loved Draco with all her heart and she had decided she really wanted to be with him forever.
“Hey Tara, what should I do! I need to seal the deal!” Hermione whispered to her friend.
“Oh, I’ve got a GREAT idea…” Tara looked at Hermione excitedly, a smile creeping across her face. Hermione grinned back. “The bend and snap!” they said in unison. (A/N: roflmao taz!!)
Hermione went up to Draco who had already started gathering the ingredients. Se picked up some wormswood, then dropped it on the ground. “Oh, I’ll get it…” she said seductively. With draco watching her every move, she slowly bent over, exposing her hot-pink thong under her red mini skirt. Draco was practically salivating, she could tell. Then, she snapped back up! Se turned to her Drake, who was looking at her hungrily. Suddenly, the bell rang for the end of classes for the day. Draco grabbed his stuff. “Meet you in our bedroom, sexy,” he said, walking out the door.
xXx
When Hermione walked into the common room, Draco was lying on the bed in his dark green silk slytherin nightgown. when she entered, he smiled slightly. She closed the door behind her and advanced a step closer. Then she hopped onto the bed, slipping off her Abercrombie denim jacket.
“Oh, Mione, my beautiful Mione” he breathed on her neck pressing his lips to hers. Hermione wrapped her arms around his shoulders. she felt something stir deep within, and taking a deep breath she pressed her body onto his. God I love him so so much, she thought. I can’t believe I was so blind…
Dracos hands rested on her hips and suddenly he broke the kiss, pulling off his shirt while she smiled and rubbed her hand on his chest. Then she kissed him passionately again. Her hands travelled around Draco’s body and she rubbed her hands on Draco’s shoulders.
Hermione gasped when Draco’s hands lifted up her skirt and his hands brushed her inner thigh - she blowed out a breath and stroked his bare back. Suddenly, he pulled off her shirt and tossed it aside. Hermione didn’t really mind, even though it was Dior. Then he took of her skirt so she only wore her hot pink lacy thong and matching hot pink lacy bra. (Both from Victoria’s Secret) Draco stifled a moan at the sight of her and Hermione licked her lips
Then Draco undid his trousers and laid himself on top of her, Hermione could feel his hands running across her body, his lips on her skin. Draco undid the clasp of her bra and threw it carelessly to the floor, and began to touch her breasts. Hermione was started to feel very aroused.
She rapped her legs around him, while she pulled down his boxers. Hermione gently wrapped her fingers around Draco’s member, while he shuddered. He pulled down her panties and once again tossed them aside.
“Oh god I love you” said Hermione passionately.
“I love you too Hermione.” Draco replied
“For all these years… I could have been with you, I could have been…”
“It doesn’t matter, let’s focus on what we’ll do now, Mione.”
Hermione gently guided him into her and he started to thrust. Deeper and deeper… each one with more urgency than before. Hermione felt his hot breath on her breast and felt something coming…. The ecstasy. She arched her back while the liquid flowed from within her. Draco was thrusting harder,
‘Oh, Drako… Draco.’ she whispered.
She hardly noticed the sweat on their bodies… all she knew, was that she had just lost her virginity. And it was the best time of her life.
A/N: ooh pretty juicy eh?? lol this chap is the longest 1 yet… but the next chappie, our mione has anuther man in hr life… wat will happen?!?!?! R.E.V..I.E.W and u will find out!!
Thank you to Seer for sending in today's Sue!
Edit: Because many of you are whining, I put the descriptions under a cut. Please forgive me for being detailed and through in sporking an 18 chaptered fic. I sincerely hope that the calamity of having to read so many sentences has not ruined your enjoyment of pottersues. Next time I will be sure to include as little as possible. /bitter
TITLE: Forever young
PERPETRATOR: eMmIe .xx
SUE-O-METER:
(toxic)
FULL NAME: Hermione Granger
SPECIES: Witch
HAIR: straightened with a "ghd". I don't know what a "ghd" is, but I'll ask my hair stylist. "she had dyed it blonde with pretty golden highlights and she had used some better hair products so her hair wasn’t frizzy and gross anymore."
EYES: not mentioned, wtf?
MARKINGS: "curves in all the right places" with "ample breasts", white teeth, and she is "stunning". She wears makeup:Diagon Alley:"Hermione put on Maybelline Dream Mouse foundation in Ivory, then Maybelline pink blush, a coat of Loreal Telescopic Mascara, black Rimmel eyeliner (but not too much coz she would look like some emo freak), and some Maybelline Shiny licious lip gloss in Cola float." and "a 3 step skin routine using some new Clinique products so she didn’t have any pimples". Red Outfit: "Maybelline dream moose foundation in Ivory, then put on some red Chanel lipstick, some Loreal Telescopic Mascara, and she warmed up her face by sweeping on some Revlon powder Blush in Naturally nude". Day After Sexing Draco: "Maybelline dream moose foundation, a swipe of Loreal Telescopic Mascara, Maybelline wet shine diamonds lipgloss in Rhinestones, and a little bit of Napoloen Pardis eyeshadow in coral spice with a sweeping of pink Maybeline dream Matte Moose". Yule Ball: "Maybelline Dream matte mouse in Ivory and loreal Telespopic Mascara and added a bit of sparkle to her eye makeup this time - she had just ordered some of revlon’s limited edition collection off the net so she applied sum Revlon Molten metal Liduid Shadow in bronze bomber to her eyelid. She also swept some Pout concealer under her eyes to make them look extrabright, [...] some black liquid eyeliner by Chanel and drew a pretty 60s “cat eye” style (A/N: uno… the one that flicks upward it lookz super cute), On her lips she wore her absolute fave lip gloss from Victoria’s secret - sweet talk in dark pink." The Day After Draco Crucios Her: "Rimmel concealer on the dark circles under her eyes, a coat of Loreal Telescopic Mascara and her 2nd fav lipgloss, Maybelline Shiny licious lipgloss in Cola Float".
POSSESSIONS: Lots of money her family inherited from "Uncle William", a computer, tons of make-up and clothes.Clothes: "denim mini from Abercromby, a blue sequined halter top from J Crew, some silver sequined Versace stilletos", "leopard print panties" from Victoria’s Secret, "a purple Aeropostale dress that was low cut with a push up bra (A/N: not that she needed it wink) with a Buirberry printed jacket and Docl and Gabbana stilettos", "a pink silk Victoria’s Secret nightgown", "a short red J Crew skirt, an Abercrombie and Fitch denim jacket, cherry print Keds, a Dior top that had Dior across the front in red letters", "hot pink lacy thong and matching hot pink lacy bra. (Both from Victoria’s Secret)", "a blue velvet Moshino dress that had dark blue and pink flower all over it and also had white trim. She also wore a dark blue delia’s jacket and on her feet she also wore Moshino cheap & chic hot pink sequined heels. Over the top she wore a rainbow star-print scarf from Gap and a leather American Eagle belt", "a beautful midnight blue cocktail dress from Armani exchange" that was her grandmother's, "metallic silvler heels by Hermes with diamond encrusted ankle straps", "a blue Delia’s t-shirt, American Eagle skinny jeans and cherry Keds", "Forever 21 denim skirt, which was already very short, Aeropostale white blouse, which already had around 6 buttons undone", " a white J Crew tank top with red beads around the collar, a red Tommy Hilfiger cardigan, white lacey Wet Seal shorts, Just Cavalli red ballet flats", "a cobat blue bra and pantie set with black lace trim", " skimpy black lace nightgown for her, and some even skimpier lingerie - a tiny bra that showed masses of cleavage and a g-string", "a black JCPenney skirt that was so short it was practically a belt. Under that she was wearing fishnet stockings and knee high Versace boots with a massively high heel so she was struggling to walk. On top she was wearing a low cut leopard print halter top from Aeropostale with her black lacey Victoria’s Secret bra showing". "she got $500 pocket money every week. Also, her American friends FedExed her about 4 or 5 new outfits (including shoes) every month."Objects: "a silver Tifanny’s necklace and matching bracelet and ring", diamond earrings, "Mercedez Benz which was silver and had a black striped down the side", "sparkly hair clips and she had Chanel logo earrings in her ears with real diamonds. She also wore a solid gold chain that her mom had got her for Xmas and carried a Louis Vutton hang bag and matching luggage bags", a "peach colored cashmere blanket and matching pillow", Sue-friends from her old school - Tara, Nat, Fi, Lauren and Stephyy, "a Chanel charm necklace and some solid gold rings on her hands, [and] 24 carrot gold hoop earrings", " a really pretty red flower clip from Girl Props" for her hair, "a denim Doony and Burke handbag with a mauve Chanel lambskin key chain attached to it", "a pair of light blue Marc Jacobs sunglasses", a "pale pink headband from Girl Props", " small quilted Chanel bag with a dainty little silver chain", "a black spotted headband", "a red Juicy Couture bag".
ORIGIN: This was an extra credit assignment because the Suethor was failing English. Her bff told her that what she wrote is fan fiction, so the Suethor decided to post this online. It features Makeover!Hermione who is destined for not-a-jerk!Draco. She was only nerdy and smart because she wasn't happy with who she was. After she discovered the person that she wanted to be, she turned into this vapid piece of crap.
CONNECTIONS TO CANON: She drives to Diagon Alley to meet up with Harry and Ron. They are amazed with her transformation. Harry and Ron have changed too, they are both toned and tanned. She wants Harry to like her so she does the most un-Hermioneish thing possible, she drops a book so she can bend over to show him her panties. Draco sees this and whistles at her. Then he tells her that she's hot. Hermione flirts back at him. Harry and Ron turn on Hermione, and she lies to them. She said that she was actually being sarcastic. Being the morons that they are, Harry and Ron accept her excuse. She gets her own carriage on the Hogwarts Express. It serves "field mushroom fried in butter and garlic on a salad and on a slice of sourdough bread. On the side there was a little bowl of tomato slices and chunks of feta cheese. Also there were a few slices of bread with some freshly made butter, [... and] a pitcher of water, a glass for the water and a glass of champagne too." and has a bellboy that "looked exactly like Channing Tatum in the movie Step Up (A/N: omfg… HOTT!)". Her carriages also has a couch and a TV with cable. This means she gets to watch "her 2nd fave show - America’s Next Top Model!" Draco shows up and asks why Hermione is in his private carriage. Apparently Draco always rents this carriage, which does make any sense whatsoever. In the first two minutes of their conversation, he tells her that he has never really hated muggle-borns, and that he never will. He then promises her that he will never make her cry again. Using a microphone, Dumbledore announces that Hermione and Draco are Head Girl and Head Boy, despite the fact they are in fifth year. Draco congratulates her and kisses her on the lips, in response she "tongue kisses" him back. For some reason, this kiss is projected on a big screen in the Great Hall. Harry and Ron freak out, so Hermione fake-rejects Draco at that moment, and then Dumbledore says: "There is a new rule being implemented that the head boy and head girl have to sleep in the same bed!" This is the stupidest thing I have ever read. Although all they have done is kiss, she sees herself as Draco's lover. Stressed, she goes on to MSN to chat with her Sue-friends. Draco reads the conversation over her shoulder, then they unknowingly cuddle in bed. When she becomes Draco's Potions partner, she decides to follow her love, and ignore Harry and Ron. So she does what she does best, bend and snap! This is used as an excuse to show off her "hot-pink thong". He tells her that he'll meet her in the bedroom, and she loses her virginity to him, "it was the best time of her life". The next day Adam from Durmstrang arrives (in exchange for Neville), he looks like "Adrien Grener in Entourage (A/N: my fav show ever so hott…)". Hermione and Draco decide to have him be in their group. Adam and Hermione make out at the storage cupboard, when she realizes that she loves Draco, and not Adam. She runs back to Draco, guiltily. Then, one day in the prefects bathroom, Adam joins her and they start having sex in the giant tub. Draco catches them. Adam apparates away, and Draco destroys Hermione's wand and Crucios her. Then he apparates away, also. In the Hospital Wing, she tells everyone that her injuries are the result of her fooling around with her wand in the bath. She begs Draco to forgive her, but he won't. They go to Hogsmeade, and Hermione gets drunk. There is a "Bachelorettes Auction" and Draco buys Pansy. He is very turned on by her stripper-dancing abilities. Pansy ends up cheating on him, and does cocaine at the Slytherin table. Hermione throws up and passes out. The last person she sees is Draco. She wakes up in the Hospital Wing, and finds out that no one likes her anymore, and they think she is trashy. She decides she needs to feel loved, so she hits on Blaise. They have some fun in a broom closet. Then she needs a book to study from, but Adam has it. In exchange for the book, she has sex with him. She thinks Hagrid is gross, but runs away to his hut. In the hut, she watches Legally Blond on his TV. Snape catches her and tells her that she is going to be expelled. She has a meeting with Dumbledore which boils down to this: "Wtf is with you and Draco?” asked Dumbledore. "for every other year, you have come up to my office and been like omg, Draco just called me a mudblood. So why are you pursueing a romance with him?" He is about to expel her, but she tells him that she will do anything to stay. He lets her stay if he gets to have sex with her. She rejects him and then he rapes her. She tells her bffs, and they tell everyone. This means that Dumbledore gets arrested. She gets expelled, because she did break the three strikes rule before. Then the story ends. I am sure she is going to reunite with Draco.
SPECIAL ABILITIES: Hates studying, "She liked to hang out with her Muggle friends, go to the mall, IM and go on Myspace just like a regular girl." She is trying to get back to her Muggle roots. She can drive, despite being fifteen, because "she had a special wizard license so the cops couldn’t pull her over".
NOTES: At first, I'm not going to lie, it had a trollish-vibe, but then I ruled that out. Because I know I'm going to get a bunch of comments going: "How is this not a troll??" and "Please let it be a troll." I'm going to state again that this is not a troll. The Suethor has a profile, has favorites, and has left reviews in other stories. This is just a case of someone who should be on Quizilla posted their story on ff.net instead. It's just a case of lazy-authoritis. The A/Ns before and after the chapters are horribly written, in comparison to the chapters themselves.
SAMPLE:
With every name that Professor Snape read out, Hermione’s heart sunk lower. She didn’t want to be Draco’s lab partner. She didn’t want her love to get the better of her again.
“Lavender Brown and Seamus Finnigan on Bench 6. Luna Lovegood and Blaze Zambini at Bench Seven. Gregory Goyle and Lucy Ferguson on Bench 8. And finally…” Hermione’s stomach dropped. “Our Head Boy and Head Girl, Draco Malfoy and Hermione Granger on bench 9.”
Suddenly Hermione knew. She had been thinking about her feelings for Draco for a few days now and she had come to a decision. She would forget Harry and Ron and just go for it, follow her heart. She loved Draco with all her heart and she had decided she really wanted to be with him forever.
“Hey Tara, what should I do! I need to seal the deal!” Hermione whispered to her friend.
“Oh, I’ve got a GREAT idea…” Tara looked at Hermione excitedly, a smile creeping across her face. Hermione grinned back. “The bend and snap!” they said in unison. (A/N: roflmao taz!!)
Hermione went up to Draco who had already started gathering the ingredients. Se picked up some wormswood, then dropped it on the ground. “Oh, I’ll get it…” she said seductively. With draco watching her every move, she slowly bent over, exposing her hot-pink thong under her red mini skirt. Draco was practically salivating, she could tell. Then, she snapped back up! Se turned to her Drake, who was looking at her hungrily. Suddenly, the bell rang for the end of classes for the day. Draco grabbed his stuff. “Meet you in our bedroom, sexy,” he said, walking out the door.
xXx
When Hermione walked into the common room, Draco was lying on the bed in his dark green silk slytherin nightgown. when she entered, he smiled slightly. She closed the door behind her and advanced a step closer. Then she hopped onto the bed, slipping off her Abercrombie denim jacket.
“Oh, Mione, my beautiful Mione” he breathed on her neck pressing his lips to hers. Hermione wrapped her arms around his shoulders. she felt something stir deep within, and taking a deep breath she pressed her body onto his. God I love him so so much, she thought. I can’t believe I was so blind…
Dracos hands rested on her hips and suddenly he broke the kiss, pulling off his shirt while she smiled and rubbed her hand on his chest. Then she kissed him passionately again. Her hands travelled around Draco’s body and she rubbed her hands on Draco’s shoulders.
Hermione gasped when Draco’s hands lifted up her skirt and his hands brushed her inner thigh - she blowed out a breath and stroked his bare back. Suddenly, he pulled off her shirt and tossed it aside. Hermione didn’t really mind, even though it was Dior. Then he took of her skirt so she only wore her hot pink lacy thong and matching hot pink lacy bra. (Both from Victoria’s Secret) Draco stifled a moan at the sight of her and Hermione licked her lips
Then Draco undid his trousers and laid himself on top of her, Hermione could feel his hands running across her body, his lips on her skin. Draco undid the clasp of her bra and threw it carelessly to the floor, and began to touch her breasts. Hermione was started to feel very aroused.
She rapped her legs around him, while she pulled down his boxers. Hermione gently wrapped her fingers around Draco’s member, while he shuddered. He pulled down her panties and once again tossed them aside.
“Oh god I love you” said Hermione passionately.
“I love you too Hermione.” Draco replied
“For all these years… I could have been with you, I could have been…”
“It doesn’t matter, let’s focus on what we’ll do now, Mione.”
Hermione gently guided him into her and he started to thrust. Deeper and deeper… each one with more urgency than before. Hermione felt his hot breath on her breast and felt something coming…. The ecstasy. She arched her back while the liquid flowed from within her. Draco was thrusting harder,
‘Oh, Drako… Draco.’ she whispered.
She hardly noticed the sweat on their bodies… all she knew, was that she had just lost her virginity. And it was the best time of her life.
A/N: ooh pretty juicy eh?? lol this chap is the longest 1 yet… but the next chappie, our mione has anuther man in hr life… wat will happen?!?!?! R.E.V..I.E.W and u will find out!!