Return to Baskerville (Chapter 7)

[pottsfanatic]

Thanks so much to everyone for all of the nice comments. It's very cool that you take the time, honestly. Many thanks to textualdeviance for all of your input (that's a beta yo).  Tense and first person narrative. Got it. (I think LOL)

tay_21, glofigs and luvconnor  keep sending me the messages. They keep me inspired.  :)

Alright then, hang on to your red pants. It's about to get a

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[pottsfanatic]

Thanks for following along I'm happy you are enjoying it so far. I hope I can keep up the suspense. :)
All will be revealed on John's tormentor in Chapt 8. LOL

A few insider info things. The tune Moriarty is humming (just in case you didn't know) is the one that is playing on his ipod during the scene in Richenbach Falls where he is stealing the crown jewels.

Martin Freeman LOVES to say the word Cock. I think I've heard him say it in almost everything he's done, so I had to throw it in somewhere. LOL

[tay_21]

GAH! You are perfecting the art of the cliffhanger I can see. *Glares*

This is great. Why are they doing all that to John? *MEEP* Who is doing it? Oh this is tense and horrid and so totally AWESOME!!!!! :-D

GAH! What did he just open the door too????

SPOT one portrayal of Moriarty. Excellent job. :-)

Also, YAY! for POV shifts being marked. I had meant to message you after the last one and forgot. Sorry. Bravo to you though. \o/

I also have guesses as to who has John. :-P I'll wait to see if I was right.

[pottsfanatic]

I always have to look back at the chapter so I don't give anything away. LOL I didn't realise that ff.net doesn't leave in the asterisks that I put in for character shift so I had to go back and do that. They've got a line to insert.

glad you're enjoying it. Should have 8 up soon. 9 is finished as well, but it needs a bit of tweaking for the icky bits. (Poor Watson, I really am being rather mean to him)
Who needs sleep anyway, right?? (hm, where have I heard that before. LOL)

You still need a Sherlock icon. ^_^

[darkhorse_99]

Cock is always an appropriate word to say! Why do I get the feeling that Sherlock breaking in and wandering around isn't going to end well for him?

[pottsfanatic]

Martin Freeman is fond of the word Cock. He says it in a LOT of his movies so I just had to include it here. :)

Sherlock always goes off on his own. But in this case, I agree. I wouldn't have waited either if it were John.