Return to Baskerville (Chapter 11)

[pottsfanatic]

Many thanks to textualdeviance for the input(that's still a beta yo) also thanks to everyone on twitter, lj and the fanfic site for their encouragements and reviews. I hope you all are enjoying the story and aren't getting bored. PrehistoricCat, Evanstar_Estel, Glo, Tay, LC thank you for all the positive feedback. You lot are aces.

These lovely

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[pottsfanatic]

There are a few medical people in my family so most of it was fairly easy. There were a few things I had to research though(dealing with the bum area of course, lol) Hope it wasn't too medical jargony I tried to tone that down. If you've ever been on the receiving end of listening to a surgeon though that's kind of what you get. :)

Oh, General Cho, yes... I don't think he realises how clever Mycroft really is(spoiler, sorry)

Are you still liking it overall?

[pottsfanatic]

You messaged it right? I think it's still there. I should be able to get to it in about an hour. I'm off to enlighten minds. LOL

[tay_21]

Wow that was an emotional chapter. Bravo ! Very well done. Poor Sherlock. And poor poor John. You're a mea evil writer who also happens to be writing an addictive story. :-D

[pottsfanatic]

LOL I was also called twisted by someone on the fanfic site. I guess that's good?? I really had a tough time with this one. John's not out of the woods yet either. (spoiler, sorry) ^_^

Thanks for the feedback. Might not get to Chapt12 until I'm on the plane. I'll have 8+ hours to write. Oh, and btw... I thought of another story. Hee. ;P

You still need a Sherlock icon.

[darkhorse_99]

John died in his arms WHAT WAIT NO, HE DOESN'T DIE, THAT'S NOT RIGHT WTF- Two paragraphs later, He's stabilised HUGE EXHALE. Pottsy, Pottsy, I was a nervous wreck for a minute. Well done you.

Poor poor Jawn, he's got a long road ahead of him and Sherlock's out for blood now! Will Barrymore try to finish the job?

[pottsfanatic]

Sorry I put you through such anguish. LOL Of course I couldn't kill off the good doctor. :)
No comment on Barrymore, spoilers!

Where's that Sherlock icon?? LOL

[darkhorse_99]

I *have* no Sherlock icon! Not a single one, it's very sadmaking.

[pottsfanatic]

You can nick one of mine if you like. Or here's a nice site: http://www.fanpop.com/spots/sherlock/icons you can find other icons there as well, along with some great photos of Andrew. :) (always have to think of Pottsy first you know. LOL)