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[powdered_opium]

Title: When I Get Older (I Will Be Stronger)
Author: powdered_opium
Fandom: NO.6
Pairing: implied Nezumi/Shion
Rating and Warnings: Very introspective angst. Spoilers for most of the series, especially the events of episode 7 onwards. 
Summary: When Nezumi is seven, he sings for his first soul. 
A/N: First time writing this fandom, so I'll unleashing this on the

Comments

[roweena5000]

Oh, wow. This is so beautiful, I love and adore how you take me inside Nezimi's mind and give a glint of what is in there, how he feels, why and how. I love it. Thank you!

[powdered_opium]

Oh, this is such a lovely first comment to have, especially when it's on the first fanfiction I've written in quite a while.

No, thank you for reading and commenting!

[hikari_shiroki]

Oh, the melancholy of it all really gains you from inside out.
Such a pretty view of the whole story of Nezumi, I'm glad to have read it!! First time reading something so pleasant on english in a long time! Thank you so much!

[powdered_opium]

First time reading something so pleasant on english in a long time!

Thank you for giving such a genuine and encouraging comment! This really made my day, not going to lie. ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

[analineblue]

I absolutely LOVED this. It's such a wonderful look into Nezumi's head. Heartbreaking, but so realistic and in character.

I loved so many individual lines here, too many to even name, because this is all so beautiful, but... This - Love is the coins on a dead man’s eyes. This is perfect. Really perfect. <3

Please write more for this fandom? *_*

[powdered_opium]

Thank you so much! This is making me extremely happy especially since I'm a hardcore lurker of your NO.6 fic, ahem.

Actually, out of all the lines, I do have a soft spot for that one. It flashed into my head and I ran to type it into the document. <3

I have a few ideas hovering, I have to admit. My policy with fanfiction is I write it infrequently because I only write it when I have a very specific fandom scenario I want to play with. NO.6 is my new fandom baby, and I'm currently in the gooey-eyed infatuation stage with it where I keep recommending it to everyone and downloading an absolute ton of fanmixes. XD

[uakari120]

Wow - I really, really adored this. I loved the way you portray Nezumi as his bundle-of-contradictions-and-stuffed-down-emotions self without devolving into unreadable angst or slipping in and out of character. Beyond that, your prose is really pretty and fun to read (and maybe I have a *thing* for stream-of-consciousness fic, but that's neither here nor there :P).

So much love for this. <3

(Also: A deus ex machina of overblown literary proportions, grand and confusing and terrible - I LOL'ed . Hard XD)

[powdered_opium]

Thank you so much! I think Nezumi is so beloved by NO.6 fans, I was a little wary of braving a fic centred around him -- I actually started this after the episode where his forest-people roots were revealed, because something about the idea captivated me. So it's so encouraging to hear I'm doing this right. (Don't worry, I totally have a thing for it myself, esp. since I enjoy writing it. You can thank At Swim, Two Boys for that.)

<3 <3 <3 <3

(Hahahahaha, I hoped someone would get the cynicism! I knew I had to write it in somehow, but I couldn't manage it entirely seriously.)

[aaabb]

It was beautiful... it was like a stream that kept drag you along and you couldn't stop to breath 'cause his mind was drowning in that stream and you couldn't think to clutch to something 'cause you were his thought. And last, like the water how falls from a cliff, and reach the the lake beneath the waterfall, the run was transformed in a slow pace, something calm, how gave this warm feeling like you can now close your eyes and relax because the danger is gone.

[powdered_opium]

Whoa, this has to go down as one of the most poetic feedbacks I've ever had. Thank you so much for reading and commenting; I'm happy you enjoyed it! ♥