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Conversations About the Inevitable

Apr 18, 2008 13:58

Title: Conversations About the Inevitable
Fandom: Terminator: The Sarah Connor Chronicles
Characters/Pairings: John/Cameron, Sarah/Kyle, and although it's about Sarah/Derek, I hesitate to classify it as a Sarah/Derek fic.
Rating: PG-13. It's all very tame, just a couple of "bad words".
Spoilers: Season 1
Description: John and Cameron on Sarah & ( Read more... )

tscc, kyle reese, john connor

Comments 30

cisaac April 18 2008, 23:27:28 UTC

Very well done. I greatly enjoyed it.

Your Cameron dialog was spot on, the internal narration about the cheese was great.

un4scene April 19 2008, 02:11:31 UTC

Very nicely done, great insight into John's unusual relationship with his dad.

damsels_fly April 19 2008, 03:12:13 UTC

The walk of shame was a short one.
Hee! I. Love. This.
I love Derek/Sarah. This ship has so much potential angst; a "perfect" dead brother between them, and, who loved Kyle more. That kind of guilty, angsty painful ship!?! Yes, please. :)

scarletumbrella April 19 2008, 03:39:09 UTC

Ahhh, I loved this! :D So many great lines, and perfect John voice. A couple of my faves:

'Hi, I'm Sarah Connor, wanted fugitive. By the way, my son's the savior of mankind so some killer cyborgs from the future might try to dismember us from time to time.'

Then he remembered that she's only like that because she's a computer that doesn't know how to fake tact. He wondered what that said about him.

she shouldn't have the capacity to understand these things. He didn't, and he was actually human.

Great job. :)

twasadark April 19 2008, 14:16:21 UTC

Great job! You've really captured John's conflicting emotions. Very well written, as well.

I wonder if you might allow me to read this as a podfic (mp3) for the amplificathon challenge that is going on right now? I have several podfics up at that comm if you'd like to hear my previous work.

Hope to hear from you! :-)

powergrapes April 19 2008, 19:34:40 UTC

I'll agree under one condition - let me know when it's up!

I've never heard of podfics. It sounds cool. Go ahead, and good luck.

twasadark April 19 2008, 20:22:08 UTC

Yay! I'll *definitely* let you know when it's up! :-)

Do you have a piece of music you associate with this story? If not, I can pick something. Just thought I'd ask ...

Thanks so much!

powergrapes April 20 2008, 01:30:43 UTC

Nope. Nothing in particular. Go nuts.