SIN BOLDLY

[poziomeczka]

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long 'ol comment is lawng

[lulahbelle]

I'm trying to write the one where Marcus comes to Esca in the Seal village, but I take absolutely bloody aaaaaaaages to do something right/or basically competent --- as evidenced by my recent spate of truly atrocious stream of consciousness/rapidly written fic so yeah don't expect it anytime soon

Re: long 'ol comment is lawng

[ladytiferet]

Oh god. Oh god. This. I have no words. Your musings broke me into pieces, and it's not even a proper fic!
I would lock you in my basement and shout "write! write!" through this small window up near the ceiling :D

Re: long 'ol comment is lawng

[lulahbelle]

LOL YAY I KNEW IF I WAS A PERVERT LONG AROUND THE PLACE LONG ENOUGH THAT SOMEONE WOULD MAKE ME THEIR SLAVE - I usually have to pay for it see.

Seriously I'm gonna write this, but like I said, takes me so long to make sense of things and when I don't make sense of them fic is no good so yeah I'm working on it. SLOW BRANE IS SLOOOOOW.

I am watching an rewatching The Eagle every spare waking moment I have though. God their love is soooooo intense, and Esca is a beautiful, beautiful thing throughout.

Re: long 'ol comment is lawng

[ladytiferet]

AT YOUR SERVICE, BB :D

I know what you're saying, but seriously, what you served us? It more than makes sense. It's an absolutely beautiful analysis of character's motivation and headspace, IT MAKES ALL THE SENSE IN THE WORLD.

God, he is. We re-watched it yesterday and we wept. WEPT AND SQUEED.

Re: long 'ol comment is lawng

[poziomeczka]

LULAH.

You've told me you were thinking about it before and I was like 'god I hope that's still on', cause you had so much insight into that scene that it would be such a shame to leave it at that.

THIS ♥

Re: long 'ol comment is lawng

[lulahbelle]

Yes I've written it pretty much already, and there is lots that I've written that I like, but I make things so needlessly complicated in terms of motivation, that it gets difficult to write it clearly and succinctly, without spending ages editing it and paring it down and clarifying it.

I will do though, I must, it's my duty.

HAVE BEEN WATCHING THE EAGLE LAWTS YAH AND DAMN SUCH GOOD PAIN PORN ---- I mean besides all the regular sex based porn.

Seriously awesome prompt.

Re: long 'ol comment is lawng

[ladytiferet]

Well, it'll be kind of impossible to cram all of that into a story anyway, so it's mostly for your own comfort and confidence that you'll know exactly how the characters are gonna behave in any given situation and context. You know your Marcus, you know why he acts like that, and that's the most important thing, he won't ring false.

It is! Now that you have us all stoked up :D

Re: long 'ol comment is lawng

[lulahbelle]

Yea see this is the problem with me when I write, I am constantly trying to cram everything I know in there, and it takes me a while to work out for myself what is appropriate to keep back y'know - that's why I get confused. I have a draft done now but I will need to edit and reedit and edit and reedit for a while because you know its probably an insensible mess at the moment. Still I have a firmer grasp (and by that I mean any grasp at all) of what I'm after with this than I usually do when I write so hopefully it will go quicker than usual.
Fingers X'd.

Re: long 'ol comment is lawng

[ladytiferet]

I think I understand how it works with you, and it's kind of hard to give up things too :) But it all will be visible in their actions anyway :)
Definitely!