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[Challenge] Where stars have fallen

Jan 17, 2013 23:32

Title: Where stars have fallen
Pairings: Jaejoong/Junsu
Rating: R
Genre: Romance, angst
Warnings: Character death and hints to prostitution and sex
Length: One-shot

A/N: This was written for my community un_scribbled's one-shot prompt "stars" and secretly based on Jaejoong's ridiculously perfect album and this gif:

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size: one-shot, pairing: jaejoong/junsu, genre: angst, band: dbsk, genre: romance, rating: r

Comments 40

shupashta January 17 2013, 22:38:51 UTC

mouahahaha

shupashta January 17 2013, 22:46:25 UTC

okay, that's sad, but they end up together, so it's not too sad .-.

ppeogi January 18 2013, 21:15:58 UTC

Stop deluding yourself, you like sad ;D I know you~

shupashta January 18 2013, 21:52:12 UTC

I'm not xD It would've been sadder if they didn't end up together, but they did, so, it's sad, but not ... ya know xD

But yes, I like sad xD

daramjwi January 17 2013, 22:47:23 UTC

D8 sad second spot.

I'll read tomorrow~~

daramjwi January 18 2013, 14:02:21 UTC

noooeees.. now I feel so bad for stealing all your fluff D8

I really like the forrst with the stars on the ground.. and poor Junsu!! there's so much story in so few words O_O and there is still a lot of surroundings and atmosphere.. I don't know how you keep doing this.

but I like angst anyway~

(Junsu is so cute with his questions >.<)

ppeogi January 18 2013, 21:17:22 UTC

You should feel bad ;^; I seriously meant this to be fluffy, but... It just... Turned out to be one of the most angsty things I've ever written ._. At least the ending was... sorta good? No? *sighs* Fortunately the fluffy of your oneshot compensates ^^

And how I keep doing it? Hahaha xD Writing non-stop for almost two years now really does the trick, trust me ;D

kkumkkae January 17 2013, 23:12:39 UTC

GDI LJ SWALLOWED MY COMMENT ANYWAY
I HATE YOU FOR DUMPING THIS AND THEN LEAVING AND LEAVING ME HERE TO DEAL WITH MY FEELS BY MYSELF D:< this is saaad ;A; they need more cuddles (and I need more jaesu) but uguuuuuu saaad saad
and idk stars is pretty in there if you ask me >_>
Also this sentence: “Anyone?” his voice sounded pathetic.
--> All I could think was OKAY? OKAY> ASLDKGJ /dies
/rolls over in her feels
/sobs
/falls out of bed
/sobs some more

daramjwi January 18 2013, 14:03:31 UTC

/hugs

sorry for stealing the fluff and that you now have to go through some Jaesu angst instead..

ppeogi January 18 2013, 21:18:35 UTC

They do need more cuddles, don't they? ;^; I dunno whut happened~~~ Guh, so many Jaesu feels. Maybe I should go for a chaptered one after all... With lots of angst and ever more cuddles and love making and kissing and Jaesu buttbabies and no wait not that last one ._. *coughs* :'3

ps: Snake-porn

kkumkkae January 18 2013, 21:26:30 UTC

ALKSJDGLAKSJDF STOP IT WITH THE SNAKE MY BRAIN DOES THIS ENOUGH BY ITSELF OKAY
and yes, you should. Definitely. Do it.

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mango_arashi January 17 2013, 23:52:48 UTC

T__T

but beautiful!

but TT______TT

ppeogi January 18 2013, 21:21:46 UTC

Im sorry ;^; *hugs*

Have some Jaesu cuddly times to compensate:

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mango_arashi January 18 2013, 23:14:27 UTC

thank you! <3

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ppeogi January 18 2013, 21:22:43 UTC

You decidedly like this? That's not good... I think? It turned out way angstier than I had meant it to be, but at least they still found each other in the end :'3 That counts for something, doesn't it?

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ppeogi January 23 2013, 09:39:45 UTC

I'm ok with you commenting in whatever way you like, you know that ;) I think you got the message of this one-shot perfectly right. I was aiming for the 'fighting spirit' and the 'together in the end' side of Jaejoong, but I think in the end I went a bit overboard on the angst there... Well, at least you managed to read it in there still ^^ You're a very smart reader you are!