Won’t let go

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Title: Won’t let go.
Pairing: Yoko/Maru, Ryo/Ohkura, Yasu/Subaru (side)
WordCount: 8,154
Rating:  R? mostly R-13.
Genre: romance, fluff
Disclaimer: Story/plot originated from head, nothing else.
Summary: Maru-chan’s dilemma and Ryo-chan’s trauma.
Warning: There is NEWS in the fic. When I first started this fic…it was before NEWS turn 4-nin…I didn’t change

Comments

[clo06]

Ohhhhh Am I first? Sooo nice!!!

I liked it!! Really! Yoko/Maru and Ryo/Kura are my two favorites couples, so I was happy to read this fic.

Maru and Yoko were so cute! I like the way taht Yoko take cares of Maru.

And poor Ryo... He was sooo confuse! But everyone knows that Ohkura will always love him and just him! loll RyoKura couple is so perfect! haha

Thanks a lot for writing this! :)

[pppyyyccc]

Thanks so much for the comment T^T~!
can't say Yoko/Maru is my OTP but I definitely love them both~
RyOhkura = love XD I think they are pretty perfect too.
yay for another RyOhkura fan ^^

[lilly0]

Thanks so much for sharing this!
Yay for a Kanjani-Fic!!
And I love how you write them <3
It's sooooooooooooooooo adorable. Yoko and Maru are so cute <3

Thanks so much for this!!<3

[pppyyyccc]

It makes me so happy that you read this <3
thanks for reading and commenting!
I thought I wrote them pretty badly lol...so thanks so much for the compliment, makes me want to continue writing some more fics XP
lots of love for Yoko and Maru <3

[iixmidgetxii]

hahaha!! omg oi!!! i finally finished reading it!! its so frigging longgg!!! but i loved it!!! i totally cracked up throughout the story ><
there were like bits that were real funny to me... dunno the exact reasons but yea LOL
its real good! ill prob remember this one more than the others xD
ill talk to u more about it when u get bak LOL

[pppyyyccc]

ehhh you really commented... (totally happy lol)
yeah its long aye XD
thanks la~ and yeah, talk about it when I'm back lol~

love the picture btw, in fact it looks kind of like a manga character o.o

[koyashige90]

Aaah~~ It's always so nice to read some Eito love, and since RyOhkura is my OTP of all time I especially enjoyed those parts. But caring Yoko was also really adorable. :) Thank you for posting ^__^

[pppyyyccc]

Thanks so much for reading and commenting!
RyOhkura is my OTP too~~~

[z55o88e99]

WOW! such a long fic!! love the story plot!

hahaha~ Drunk Maru
"Getting drunk like this and revealing his love like this in public. At least he is smart enough to be drinking by himself in our usual place.”

thnx to u i think i'm lyking the YokoMaru pairing more nd more! they always seem so cute in ur fics!

Pi nd jin's baywatch scene nd ryo's response to it totally cracked me up oii!! nd how subaru demanded yasu to go over to sing "love songs" to Maru coz he cant handle it!! rofl~~!!

haha!! u even googled the stomach medicine~ such a dedicated author :D

RyOkura, YokoMaru, Pin, Yasuba~ nd Hina the Eito Mama!! :) Enjoyed reading ur pairings!!

[pppyyyccc]

that's cause Yoko is cute and Maru is cute, they make the cutest pair (you should listen to PanPanda)~
but you do know my OTP is YokoHina right XD (read my newest fic!)

you know, I read this again and realized... I FORGOT THE PORRIDGE!!! I forgot write the bit where Yoko feeds porridge to Maru! hahaha (and found more mistakes which I cant be bothered fixing XP)

thanks for reading and commenting la.

p.s btw did you realized I didn't write a smut part for YokoMaru? lol I struggled with the RyOhkura part already~ so YokoMaru doesn't get a smut part o.o~ though they did have the shower sex talk instead *wink wink* lol