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Jun 22, 2004 04:15

The day of the funeral was not sad, simply because she hadn’t wanted it to be. We’d come, in cut offs and tank tops, knocking our sweaty thighs against the warm altar pew while the preacher thought aloud, mostly wondering why He took her so soon. And we’d listened, because we’d loved her ( Read more... )

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intricate_ June 22 2004, 01:30:13 UTC
did you write that? it's effin amazing. words cant describe it. im dumb founded.

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pradamafia June 22 2004, 08:45:42 UTC
Yes, I did write it. And thank you Ari

xoxoxoxoxoxooxox

xx.

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ladyluxe June 22 2004, 04:34:38 UTC
that was just...beautiful *printing as i type* yup that's def goin on my wall. did u write that?

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pradamafia June 22 2004, 08:46:24 UTC
Yes, I did write it. Thank you--that's sucha huge compliment.

xox.

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bel_ebat June 22 2004, 06:16:23 UTC
that's beautiful jade.

i love when you post these drafts. it reminds me of my writing group at school which i love.

xx

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pradamafia June 22 2004, 08:47:12 UTC
Thank you tons Alessandra. You have such a way with words, I'm honored.

xx.

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from1964 June 22 2004, 06:38:39 UTC
I find that extremely well-written.
You should definitely stick to writing.

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pradamafia June 22 2004, 08:47:53 UTC
As should you, Olivia. Your writing sometimes bring tears to my eyes--it's so real.

xx.

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soccergal19 June 22 2004, 12:35:57 UTC
lovely.

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pradamafia June 23 2004, 10:13:06 UTC


xox.

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