Numb3rs Fic: Stages of Grief 2/2

[prairie_city]

Title: Stages of Grief
Disclaimer: All recognizable characters and storylines are the property of their writers and producers.  No money is being made from this work of amateur fiction and no copyright infringement is intended.
Lenth: 2,841 words of 5,119
A/N: I wrote this story as a one-shot, but Livejournal's being a dick and making me post it in

Comments

[prairie_city]

Thanks very much, I'm glad you liked it. Thank you for commmenting.

[rowiian]

Wow. That was really... yeah. Um, I really don't know what to type... But I'll give it a shot.

It was very painful to read. You just poured on with the angst! So much emotion in this fic... I'm really glad I found it :) And by the way, I love how you didn't just put Charlie in front of his old chalkboard and let him grieve the exact same way he after his mom died. He didn't want to hurt Don and shut him out of his life like he did before... Loved that.

[prairie_city]

I'm so glad you liked it. I hope you didn't find it too painful, but...well, it's a painful subject, and I wanted to do it justice.

I'm glad you found it, too. Thanks for the lovely comment, I haven't stopped grinning like a loon since I got it. :D

Leah

[rowiian]

I cried myself to sleep. And then I had horrible nightmares.

Just kidding! :D
But seriously, it was moving, beautifully written, and overall a perfect exemple of how a real fic should be written. The last part almost brought tears to my eyes. *sniffs loudly* :') A proof of how great it was.<3

[prairie_city]

I can die happy, now. *dies happily*

[ext_3308911]

That was sweet. I almost cried.