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Numb3rs Fic: Lucky, 1/3

Jul 12, 2010 15:49

Title: Lucky
Author: Leah Harper (prairie_city)
Author's Note: Written for the 2010 numb3rs_bigbang fest. Last edited on May 31st, 2012.
Word Count: 24,500
Summary: AU. Don and Charlie never got on better terms with each other. Charlie occasionally helps out with cases, but both brothers essentially remain on their own ends of the spectrum - Charlie at his chalkboards, and Don ( Read more... )

lucky, numb3rs big bang, chaptered fic, numb3rs, all fic

Comments 8

t_vo0810 July 19 2010, 06:06:33 UTC

I already commented but i had to come back and point to this:

“Hi, Charlie,” Granger said, coming over and offering his hand. Charlie automatically reached out and shook it. Out of the corner of his eye, he saw Don’s left fingers twitch, and Charlie jumped and released Agent Granger’s hand, eyes going immediately to his brother, who was watching him closely. Don was frowning.

and say it's moments like these that make me want Don pov like burning. so i know that after all the hard work on this story, you are prolly reluctant to dive back into this verse. just know, if you ever do, you will make me a happy fangirl indeed.

prairie_city July 19 2010, 20:30:32 UTC

LOL, like burning, eh? That's a good thing, I hope!! I wish I could explain what is happening with Don here, but I'm afraid it would spoil any potential companion piece if I did. Again, I'm not sure if I'm going to write one, but I am seriously contemplating it. In honor of that, I'm going to keep my mouth shut here.

t_vo0810 July 19 2010, 23:42:11 UTC

tease! :D:D:D

will it help push you into the 'yes definitely i am writing don pov companion fic' if i go and list all the other places i want dov's headspace like burning? cause i totally will torture you that way until you agree. :D

prairie_city July 21 2010, 21:16:13 UTC

I'm a chronic tease!! :D:D:D

No torture!!! Lol, *sticks fingers in ears in preparation of torment*

*peeks up*

Really, more places like burning...?

kdorian October 27 2010, 03:55:43 UTC

I have to say, I also am hoping for a Don POV companion piece to this! His reactions obviously mean something, but I can't tell what. I'll keep my fingers crossed!

Excellent story!

prairie_city October 27 2010, 04:42:17 UTC

Thanks for reading and commenting! I have to say, I've been incredibly busy lately and haven't been writing much, but I'm not against the idea of eventually doing a Don POV piece. I'm glad you enjoyed reading this one and thanks again for the comment!

fractalmoon November 23 2012, 18:38:08 UTC

I am amazed at the intensity you convey, as you describe all the sensations Charlie is feeling. Looking forward to reading the rest.

prairie_city November 23 2012, 22:47:57 UTC

Why thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed this part - as for me, it is always an indescribable delight to realize that even nearly three years after posting, there must still be people reading it - and even, every once in a while, a gem like yourself who leaves a comment. Indescribable delight! Thank you - you've handily made my day. :-)