Comments | prairie_city: Fic: I keep looking at the sky [SPN | Dean | Sam | gen

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Fic: I keep looking at the sky [SPN | Dean | Sam | gen | 7600 words]

Feb 27, 2011 22:46

Title: I keep looking at the sky
Author: L. Harper (prairie_city )
Fandom: Supernatural
Disclaimer: All recognizable characters and storylines are the property of their writers and producers. No money is being made from this work of amateur fiction and no copyright infringement is intended.
Author’s Note: I'm very new to Supernatural, and this is my first fic in ( Read more... )

rated-r, genfic, supernatural, all fic, one-shot, writing

Comments 37

ramblin_rosie February 28 2011, 09:00:03 UTC

It's The Adventures of Paul on the Floor shrunk!Sam, who is miles beyond cute! And awesome big brother Dean! Ah, poor boys, but still... too cute by half! *melts*
Delightful fic. Welcome to the fandom. :D

prairie_city February 28 2011, 09:12:19 UTC

Aw, hell. Did I totally just plagiarize someone? I have never heard of The Adventures of Paul on the Floor, honest!

Anyways, thanks so much for commenting! I'm glad you enjoyed it. I loved it and I loved writing it and I'm so glad someone else liked it too! *dies of delight*

Now I'm going to look up this Paul on the Floor person and make sure I didn't unintentionally rip off someone else...

ramblin_rosie February 28 2011, 09:22:36 UTC

No, no! It's a snippet from the movie Help! (http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=PWtXT50__KQ [starts around 2:50])--the only similarity, really, is that Paul McCartney gets shrunk in the middle of a crisis. :)

prairie_city February 28 2011, 09:33:17 UTC

Oh, good! *is relieved* I was worried for a minute! Then I got distracted because, hello, I was just scanning through the entry and where did that paragraph go? It was right here...

I think LJ ate it.

*baffled*

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prairie_city February 28 2011, 15:47:22 UTC

Aww, thanks! So glad you enjoyed, and thanks so much for commenting! :)

saraic333 February 28 2011, 10:37:49 UTC

ha! that was awesome. made me laugh, go awww, then laugh again. I just noticed this is your first fic for spn? wow, you really nailed the boys too - you didn't mention when your story was set, but it felt like season 1 or 2 boys right?

thanks for sharing your fic with us, hope you write a lot more! XD

prairie_city February 28 2011, 15:53:28 UTC

Aw, I'm so happy you enjoyed it! Yes, my first SPN fic and I purposely didn't set it during any specific time, so readers can imagine them during any season. I wrote this to be essentially trigger-free, and I don't know how well I succeeded but that was the goal, anyway.

Thanks so, so much for commenting!

mimblexwimble February 28 2011, 13:10:42 UTC

This was adorable! You have an incredible Dean-voice! I love how affected he was by Sam's size, and how much of an annoying big brother he was about it, at the same time. The details you've added - Sam's heartbeat, the carsickness, Dean putting shampoo in Sam's hair, Disneyland, the little hug - made this even better. Amazing job! I love this fic to pieces!

prairie_city February 28 2011, 15:57:15 UTC

You have an incredible Dean-voice!

You think so? That's so awesome of you to say! That was my biggest worry, that I was completely shredding their characterizations and going wildly off into OOC territory, but I kept thinking, who in the entire world could be unaffected by tiny!sam?

And, so. Fluff.

I'm so glad you enjoyed it, and thank you thank you so much for commenting. :)

shaitanah February 28 2011, 19:14:28 UTC

This is so damn cute! This needs to be on the show, it's just too perfect! And Dean is, without a doubt, the best big brother ever (in all senses)).

prairie_city February 28 2011, 20:59:04 UTC

Thanks so much! I'm glad you enjoyed it. If they put a similar trope on the show I think I would die a happy, happy person.

And thank you so much for commenting! :)