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pandamanium September 12 2008, 02:48:23 UTC
Oh, I love this. I love this couple. You write the best porn. :D

I miss Seto/Mokuba though.

You're awesome. ^^

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praiseofshadows September 13 2008, 03:57:34 UTC
Yay! Another Anakin/Padmé ♥-er!!!! ♥ I'm so glad you enjoyed it! :D

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luminations September 12 2008, 04:18:04 UTC
This is lovely. (and hot!) The prompts all flow together so nicely.

I like #25)School the best. "Like he created the universe or something" indeed!

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praiseofshadows September 13 2008, 04:06:21 UTC
I'm so glad you think it flowed well! ♥ Thanks for reading! :D

Anakin thinks he might've created the universe. If Padmé would like to think so XD

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elthegeneral September 12 2008, 04:58:44 UTC
Wow wow wow!

That summed them up so well for me!!! Wow again! Really... really good!

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praiseofshadows September 13 2008, 03:58:25 UTC
I'm so glad you liked it! ♥

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pronker September 12 2008, 07:37:13 UTC
Excellent progression throughout, very nice and needless to say, hot.

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praiseofshadows September 13 2008, 03:59:13 UTC
Thanks so much!!! ♥ I'm very happy you thought the pacing worked! :D

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emavalexis September 12 2008, 14:12:30 UTC
You used the prompts really well, and managed to convey such hotness and passion in so few words. Very effective and well done. :)

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praiseofshadows September 13 2008, 04:10:01 UTC
I'm so glad you thought I used the prompts well! Thank you very much! ♥ It was rather fun to try and use as few words as possible XD

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