Comments | praiseofshadows: [fic] make it easy (second chances)

praiseofshadows

[fic] make it easy (second chances)

Nov 10, 2008 20:14

Yeah, so I can't keep myself from playing with Second Chances. Takes place directly after this. Has no redeeming value.

Anakin/Padmé. Anakin's issues masquerade as pr0n. Yeah... Rish? NC-17ish?

( it's a dynamite of a track )

second chances, fic, anakin/padme is creepy love

Comments 6

luminations November 12 2008, 04:20:16 UTC

Mmmmm, hawt! You write very real-feeling sex scenes. Hot, but the sex isn't all happy joy yay "everyone come at once nice & pretty" affairs. Good stuff!

praiseofshadows November 13 2008, 03:21:09 UTC

I'm so glad you thought it worked! :D (Because yeah...for some reason I never can see Anakin & Padmé having prettified sex -- I don't know why XD) Thanks for reading! ♥

emavalexis November 24 2008, 22:56:27 UTC

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Perfect. I could see sex between them being like this in the beginning of their canon relationship, too. Very real, very awkward, very believable.

Excellent work, as always.

praiseofshadows December 1 2008, 17:40:33 UTC

YES! Can't you just see this as their sex life when they first married? Because they would be so awkward. Anakin, especially, because -- well, that boy's got some serious issues, starting with...y'know, probably having like a few million scenarios of how it should be perfect in his mind and yet...when he's actually faced with a very real Padme -- yeah, not so much.

I kindasorta want to write bizarre fic of Anakin fantasizing about Padme like back when he really is a teenager...just because I'm a horrible person like that XDDDD

But yeah, sorry for the complete rambling. I'm so glad you liked it! ♥

emavalexis December 2 2008, 20:20:55 UTC

No, I totally get that, and it's a view I also happen to share. In fact, I have always said that if one had to pick either Anakin or Padmé as being the one with previous sexual experience, then it would definitely be Padmé. For some reason, however, I find a lot of (shitty) A/P authors tend to write it the other way -- which makes absolutely no sense to me, and not for some stupid reason like the age difference or any such nonsense.

I have written of one possible scenario of their first time together, in passing, as posted on my journal in case you're wildly curious. Heh.

praiseofshadows December 5 2008, 17:41:52 UTC

*nod nod* Yes, Padmé is the one I'd bet on, too, for some previous sexual experience. Because Anakin? Not so much given his one-track obsession with her (even assuming Obi-wan wouldn't have had a problem with Anakin sexing up every girl within sight, which some A/P authors do assume. Tho it's my belief that Obi-wan was rather repressed himself, so...yeah, not so much. There's also a part of me that wants to believe that the whole "jedi aren't celibate" thing is code for "jedi have sex when they think the chances are good they'll procreate and make lots of force sensitive babies for the order. And I'm thinking the last thing the Council would want is Chosen One babies. Because they already liked the Chosen One oh-so-much. Not. XDDD)

tl;dr version: I totally agree. And I want to read the pretty fic, but I am at work, so fic reading is out until later. Alas! D: but just wait, I'll make ninja comments later XD