A Love Betrayed - Severus/Evan Rosier ficlet

[prayer_at_night]

Author: prayer_at_night
Recipient: alley_skywalker
Title: A Love Betrayed
Pairing: Severus Snape/Evan Rosier
Request/Prompt: Betraying someone you love
Rating: PG-13?
Word Count: ~420
Info: Written for the Wish List Event 2016 at rarepair_shorts
Author's Notes: I don't write often anymore, but this prompt just clicked for me. I hope you like my take on your prompt, alley_skywalker! :)
Many thanks to digthewriter for

Comments

[alley_skywalker]

Aww this was so sad and sweet in terms! I loved the bits of hurt/comfort and how easily everything flows together. Thank you for writing this <3

[prayer_at_night]

I'm glad you like it! :D You posted so many great prompts, I hope some more of your wishes will be fulfilled. :)
Thanks for your comments! <3

[llaeyro]

You should definitely write more! You have a lovely way with words. This was so atmospheric. You could feel the shift in the room, from the calm comfort of their post-coital snoozing to the tense quiet as Severus makes his escape. This was such a bitter-sweet little snippet, but with enough backstory to make it feel real and painful. I particularly loved Severus still being sticky, I'm a sucker for realistic little details like that! Well done squeezing so much so eloquently into this tiny space =)

[prayer_at_night]

Thanks so much for your awesome comments! <3
I'm so happy to hear you like this little story - especially the stickiness (I'm a sucker for these small realistic details as well! :D) and the atmosphere!
I have always loved writing, but lately (as in, the last few years O_o), I haven't really managed to get into the right headspace. I'm thrilled that I could write down this spinnet and hope that my luck will hold! :)

[articcat621]

Well I cried at the end. This was so angsty and bittersweet... I love that Severus is doing what he knows is right, despite the fact that it may ruin what he has with Evan. Wonderfully written <3

[prayer_at_night]

Thank you so much for the wonderful comments! <3 I cannot say I'm glad you cried, but I am very happy to know this touched you. :3 Thank you for letting me know! <3