perfect waves

[praying4surf]

It was mid afternoon as the shadowy clouds rolled in like chariots over the light blue sky. The waves rumbled and tumbled inward toward the pier as the surfers strapped on their board leashes. The waters rose to the height of a small mountain so that you couldn’t see anything on the other side. Like walls, the waves stretched for hundreds of feet

Comments

[x_gl0ry_fades_x]

you call this a short story... i call it a novel.
i think you'll def get an A. Excellent job pookins

[1_800woah_nelly]

ryan..im so proud!! you got your writing skills from me right?? lol =/ thats a very descriptive story you got there!! haha..TOODLES