Incubi & Vampires.. Oh My! (part 17)

[premerseahshiko]

15 years later
It was winter and freezing cold as winters go in Russia. I'm just lucky we didn't move to Siberia, Tao thought, smiling a little. But at least he could easily see all the stars in the wintertime, or at least when it wasn't snowing. He was 27 now and devilishly handsome and even taller than Mikhail. The snow had begun to fall, little

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[afterburn]

"What about your mother? How is Akihito?"
"Mommy's fine. In fact, he was the one who finally convinced Dad to let me visit."
God I nearly choked when I read that! xD

Awww its over? That's so sad. This last bit made me laugh a lot though. Especially the thought of Akihito being pregnant again. He must be making the other incubuses edgy. Wonderful read but sad its over!

[lovingly_sadist]

"What about your mother? How is Akihito?"
"Mommy's fine. In fact, he was the one who finally convinced Dad to let me visit." She smiled wider as she said, "Dad will pretty much give him anything he asks for at this point. After nineteen years, he got him pregnant again and Dad wants to do everything he can to make sure Mom isn't under stress."

I love it... I just died.

Thank you for sharing one of the best stories I've read.

[moniqee]

awwww...i was hoping for more....ie like what happen next..since Aki is pregnant again...could it be a boy this time? Tao and Masami since Asami should be a HXll of big bad father ^_*..Sequel perhaps or maybe extras for us?!

Anyway, in a nutshell, it was a good story that keep most of us wanting more. Keep it up!

[pugsley]

I have really enjoyed your story, especially since I am a huge fan of anything to do with vampires and the supernatural, but if you do not mind me saying, I feel like there is something missing. Hmmmm... ponders that thought...

I know!! It is the 15 years from when Asami finally found Akihito and Masami. What happen to them, why didn't Akihito visit? What did all 3 of them do during that time? I am sure that Masami would have thrown a fit, but also I am sure that she wanted to see her Fei-Fei and her Tao, whom she seemed to have loved so much.

Perhaps a little summation chapter that ties all that together!? Just an idea, but either way I enjoyed it!! Thanks!! (o';'o)

[phoenix_dee]

Great story and really enjoyed reading it. But I agree with most of the others about continuing with it. I would love to read more of Asami and Aki's POV and ending of the feud between the parties. Hope you will continue with this story. ^___^