Lies, Sex, And Genes Part 14

[premerseahshiko]

Title: Lies... (Part 14)
Characters: Feilong, Mikhail, Takato, Kou
        Mention of: Asami & Aki
Disclaimer: Characters are not mine.

LIES, SEX, AND GENES Part 14

Fire gasped at the intensity of the kiss and the coldness of the mouth on his sent a shiver down his spine as his own flesh heated to counter the cold hands roaming over his body. His

Comments

[yeeeeey]

Poor Ice (who doesn't get what he wants) and poor Fire (who thinks Ice only wants his body)!! And here I thought their relationship would "move"!!

Thanks for the update!!!! I love your writing, really! ^^
I miss Asami and Akihito...are they coming next? (I'm not saying that I don't like Fei and Mikhail...I actually like their complicated relationship)

And don't be annoyed by the lack of comments...I'm sure soon people will realize that it's important to comment! I never commented before and now I always say something...

[premerseahshiko]

I'm not just annoyed by lack of omments. My mom was annoying me at the time I was posting about my job.

[yeeeeey]

Oh...well, but you are clearly annoyed by the lack of comments!
I agree with paranoia_women, don't lose hope...thinks about the ones that comment and the ones that love your stories (sometimes I wait till 3am or more just to read your post!! *blush*)
I'm not good at writing (so I never posted anything) but I understand (now) what you feel about comments and I agree that if you read you should comment, but don't stop!!
you really are a wonderful writer (your stories always keep me interested)!! ^^

Comment from your No. 1 Stalker!!!

[paranoia_woman]

Nooooo! Don't say that. I'll set the net out and recapture your muse for you. They are so flighty, aren't they. I really enjoy your different story ideas you've come up with. Don't lose hope. I completely understand your feeling down about the lack of comments. I hope more people are reading mine than are commenting too.
I always think of the non-commenter's as invisible readers. You know, see through, like glass. They can't decide if they are half full or half empty so they don't say anything at all.

I only started writing stories this year. I've no idea why I started either. I've found it to be an enjoyable pasttime and I can only hope others find my rantings readable.

I want you to know I for one find your stories thoroughly enjoyable. I always smile when I see your icon up on my friends page. Don't stop.

Re: Comment from your No. 1 Stalker!!!

[premerseahshiko]

I'm really glad you find my stories enjoyable. I've been writing fanfics for almost half a year now and I began two weeks after first finding LJ. Posting nearly everyday for that amount of time I think sucked the energy from me or something... I wonder how long I'll be able to keep it up especially because I'm leaving for Hood on the 23rd...

Re: Comment from your No. 1 Stalker!!!

[paranoia_woman]

Don't become burned out. Rest and refresh your muse if you need to. I can wait, I may not like it, but I can do it. I can do it all night long! (Sorry, I've watched way to many Adam Sandler movies.
Thanks for the heads up on the trip. I'll pack my virtual sleeping bag to keep an eye out on you.

Re: Comment from your No. 1 Stalker!!!

[kajornwan]

Paranoia_woman-->Your writing is very good and definitely enjoyable!!! You don't see my comments often only because I have little time to read and I tend use that time to read only the ones with Fei in it (I should be tried and punished for this sin). I'm glad you decided to write! *hugs* There are less and less fic posts at YA lately, do you guys feel that as well?

[beschu4]

[premerseahshiko]

At least you comment every so often. Thanks for commenting now ;)

[kajornwan]

At least you let Fire came!!! I am glad!! I'll live!!! thank you. What a great chapter. I feel so sad for Fire. It makes perfect sense too

[premerseahshiko]

I will try to reply to comments more.

[mrk33]

I am ejoying your story I would like to read it from the beginning. What fate lies ahead we shall see. Keep it up.

[premerseahshiko]

Thanks for commenting ;)