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LIES, SEX, AND GENES Part 15

Aug 18, 2007 19:31

Title: Lies, Sex and Genes Part 15
Characters: Liu Sr, Yan
Mention of: Asami and Fei
Disclaimer: Not mine.
Warning: teaser, short

LIES, SEX, AND GENES Part 15

Liu awoke from a strange dream, holding his heart as sweat ran down his forehead. It had seemed so real. In the dream, Feilong was the smiling, happy boy he had been ten years earlier. He ( Read more... )

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yeeeeey August 19 2007, 00:01:07 UTC

OMG, I hate this Yan guy so so so much!!!

Thanks for the update!!

P.S --> Please, can someone show Yan a lesson?? I hate him so much!!!

premerseahshiko August 19 2007, 13:28:01 UTC

A lot of people hate Yan, but I wonder if he was actually killed in Yamane's Viewfinder series... If he comes back I want him dead by the end for hurting Fei.

beschu4 August 19 2007, 00:24:04 UTC

premerseahshiko August 19 2007, 13:29:40 UTC

Sorry it's such a teaser though. I should have made it longer but I fell asleep while writing.

kajornwan August 19 2007, 00:54:01 UTC

OMG YAN you evil you!!! Actually I don't hate Yan (I should be tried and thrown in jail with him). I don't know why I don't hate him. Maybe I just like anyone who strips Fei for me to see ha hahaha *evil evil laugh* I don't blame him. How does one live with Fei Long for over 20 years and not try to jump him at least once. He is so damn beautiful. So there's going to be a war *yaaaay*. A chance for Ice to prove himself and win his princess *drifting off dreaming smewhere* Gosh I love this fic. Thanks so much for an update.

premerseahshiko August 19 2007, 13:30:42 UTC

I hope I'll be able to write some awesome scenes that show Mik, Fei, and Asami kicking butt!

Good, Good mrk33 August 19 2007, 00:59:57 UTC

This is shaping up to be an awsome flick, just keep the pace and the tone.

Re: Good, Good premerseahshiko August 19 2007, 13:31:29 UTC

How long this awesome fic is going to be though, I have no idea. ;)

paranoia_woman August 19 2007, 01:30:10 UTC

I say we build a dome shaped cage and put Yan and Mikhail in and see who walks out.
2 men walk in, only one walks out.
Thunderdome!

Oh heck, let Yan bring in all his Snakes with him. I still believe only one, Blondie Bear, will be walking out alone.

premerseahshiko August 19 2007, 13:33:09 UTC

LOL. Ice would turn Yan into a popsicle... or at least his dick.

kajornwan August 19 2007, 16:13:59 UTC

mwa ha ha ha. Yeah go Ice go. Turn his dick into a popsicle, Fire would just love to break it, wouldn't you Fire?