Lies, Sex, and Genes Part 17

[premerseahshiko]

Title: Lies... 17
Characters: Feilong, Yanzhui, Mikhail, Tao
Disclaimer: Actual characters are not mine.
Warning: Lots of angst, some OOC, very long... may cause some depression.

LIES, SEX, AND GENES Part 17

Eight/ Nine years earlier
Liu Feilong crept into the target's office, dressed in a blood red cheongsum, his head lowered in submission to the

Comments

[aleksandrajabla]

i'm sorry i don't comment lately
but T_Y real life is to hard and 2 busy
I will read what i missed next week
just wanted to let you know
hugs

[premerseahshiko]

No problem. I understand. Today's crazy for me in real life because I move into the dorms tomorrow. :(

[samalexa]

Fire's so noble, sacrificing himself like that.
And yes I think I speak for all of us when I say that we all hate Yan... then again, without Yan to complicate things for our heroes, there would be no action in the story. I haven't felt this strongly against Yan since reading Heat! Good on ya! Looking forward to the next instalment.

[premerseahshiko]

Glad you liked it! ;) Hopefully the next part will be up later today.

[phoenix_dee]

Have to agree Yan does give the story some of its twists and turns, but another Yan hater here. lol Love the story, thanks for the update.

[90mcphee]

Noooooooooooooooooooooooooooo............!
*plots Yans gruesome demise...* >:|

But you were right, Fire and Ice did kick ass. ;D

Thank you!

[miershyk]

nuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu~

*seriously tears hair out of head* woohoo for Ice&Fire combo attack/escape... rocks!!! heh~ and oh no!!!!!!!!!!!! Yan! dammit... ahhhhhhhhhhhhhh~

for both Tao and Mik to see him like that... oh dear... waaaaaaaaaaaaaaa~ noooooooooooo~ i'm speechless... woman... love the intensity!!! golly! i'm loving you already!!! this is like... my fav fic right now along with CI... gosh!!!!!!!!

for once i'm glad i'm reading all 18 chaps at once! woa~ started reading at 3pm and it's 6.10pm now... soon... i shall finish before 4 hours is up! golly~

waaaaaaaaaaaa~ *runs to next chap* i mightn't like it but i'm looking forward to what Yan's gonna do to Fei... i'm such a sadist... nuuuuuuuuuuuu~ wanna know about Asami and Aki too! XD