Lies, Sex, and Genes Part 22

Sep 01, 2007 21:01


Title: Lies... (22)
Characters: Fei, Yan, Tao, Mikhail
                       Mention of: Liu Sr.
Disclaimer: Actual characters belong to Yamane-sensei.

LIES, SEX, AND GENES Part 22

Noon
Fire awoke to find it was past noon according to the clock. Still in the daze of a blank dream, he turned over on his side to see if Puppy was out of bed yet or still ( Read more... )

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mrk33 September 2 2007, 03:46:53 UTC
This is getting heavy. Yan raped Fei, I hate him. I hope he gets a chance to see his father.

Keep writing...............

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premerseahshiko September 2 2007, 03:48:39 UTC
He will. Don't worry ;)

Hope I'll be able to update again soon!

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trimethoprim September 2 2007, 07:14:24 UTC
I dunno what to say, I'm speechless, maybe for the first time? nooo not completely.......I know I have wished for this in my last comment, but it was sad, soooo sad, it makes me wanna cry. Especially Tao's silent care and angst for Fei, it's so moving. And the way Fei tries to keep a clear mind and not letting Tao know of his inner grief and turmoil for the sake of protecting his precious son. I want to take him into my arms too.......*cry*, I'm hypocritical, Mea culpa! last time I wished for this for my own enjoyment and now I feel sorry for both, Fei and Tao.
You described their momentarily hopeless situation and what this is causing in both of them very good, I think soon it's time to give them some hope back, sooo Ice hurry up a bit you lazy ass (joke) and cut off Yan's filthy dick already, so that he can't do any harm with it anymore!!!!!!!!!

Thanks for update, waiting for more ^_~

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premerseahshiko September 2 2007, 12:45:51 UTC
I'm glad I made you speechless. I've been trying to put more emotion into my writing.

Glad you liked it!

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beschu4 September 2 2007, 10:52:31 UTC
premerseahshiko September 2 2007, 12:46:08 UTC
Glad you liked it!

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doujinsangel September 3 2007, 03:08:07 UTC
Shit I need to borrow Mik's rocket launcher from lamiyao! yan so need to die! DIEEEEE~!!!!

Poor Fei T__T And aww *hugs* Tao. Poor kid always go trapped in bad situations. Mik. hurry!!!

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c11 September 4 2007, 08:11:29 UTC
thanks for sharing this. Tao is so lovely, trying to sooth the poor Fei.

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