Lies, Sex, and Genes Part 27

[premerseahshiko]

Title: Lies... (27)
Characters: Akihito, Asami, (OC- Scales), Takato, Kou, Tao, Feilong, Wolfhound
Disclaimer: Except for Scales, no characters belong to me. :(

LIES, SEX AND GENES Part 27

Three days after the death of Liu Sr...

"Don't say it," Akihito warned 'A' as he recognized the look on his face while the teenagers in his 'care' snickered behind

Comments

[gen50]

hmmm. i hope you continue this....
anyone for kou?

Lies, sex and genes

[nahani22]

Thank you for an interesting story. I've read all there was (so far) without stopping, so here are my comments. There are very few fanfic creations having Yanzhui play a major role. That is one of the main reasons why I found your story very interesting. Besides dmnutv_archer's mesmerizing HEAT -story, I have read only very short creations where Yan is involved. Yet, Yan's obvious obsession with his brother in the Yamane Ayano's manga offers such juicy possibilities to explore this relationship. You did a good job portraying Yan's possessiveness and jealousy of Feilong, compounded with the latter's fragile character - although not without certain strength. I also found the way you relocated the manga characters in the fantasy world of mutants quite intriguing. They seem to fit there well. There were other things I enjoyed in your story as well: the code names, for example, it was very delightful to try and guess who was who at the beginning. I though that Yoh was Ice first because Yoh is always so reserved in the manga, but later I

[shie0917]

omg! that's yoh! but poor takato! 2 lost loves in a matter of minutes! poor thing~
but i'm so happy that A's and aki's relationship has gotten so much better~