you have no idea how excited i was when i saw this was updated!!! and then i read it and...well...lets just say i just woke up after fainting from massive bloodloss!!! so fire and ice have a scene huh!! nice!! do takato and yoh have their own "world-shattering sex scene"??
Wow! That was fuckin sexy! This story has been very hot and exciting I keep finding myself holding my breath during the suspenseful parts. Can't wait for the next chapter!
That was such an excellent ending to an excellent story. It was filled with passion, colorful characters, and awesome plots. If you were to continue it, that would be just as well. There are some characters that you failed to develop thoroughly. I was personally hoping that you would give us a more in depth view of Scales, Yoh and Kou, and give Takato a happy ending (preferably in a threesome with You and Kou).
This is truly the best story that I have read in the past three months. Good Job!
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More please!!
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This is truly the best story that I have read in the past three months. Good Job!
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