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[advent 2013] fic: It's Been a Pleasure, Never Change

Dec 03, 2013 03:19

Title: It's Been a Pleasure, Never Change
Rating: PG
Pairing: Jonghyun/Kibum (kind of)
Warnings: N/A
Notes: Advent day 2 for sluthyun! AU where Jonghyun and Kibum are in high school. 1488 words. (Advent calendar or cop-out ending calendar, which is it ( Read more... )

advent 2013, pairing: jonghyun/key, fandom: shinee

Comments 9

sluthyun December 3 2013, 18:06:10 UTC

i love the underlying emotions here ;_; it's like all their actions have a double meaning. i like how this is like the stage where they're not yet admitting that they like each other but still know that there is at least something i think that's what makes the story so beautiful ;_; i was actually thinking you were going to write like a really cliché high school plot and i honestly wouldn't have mind (i secretly love cliché plots) but this was so much better, it was so realistic and cute and sad at the same time because you're frustrated that they don't, like, admit their feelings, but i guess that's what makes stories like these so great. letting the reader know something but leaving the characters in limbo is such an effective way of creating tension in a story and you were able to do just that, i'm somewhere sad with the ending because it's like the tension will never end, since we don't know what's going to happen next, but on the other hand i'm happy because once again, that's what makes stories like these so great. your fanfics ( ... )

sluthyun December 3 2013, 20:46:02 UTC

oh my god i just read the title (don't know why i haven't seen it yet) but a piece just broke off my heart. i feel like the title is the end of the story. it is. omg. "it's been a pleasure, never change" i'm going to JHKJRGHSJK am i making sense

preorder December 3 2013, 22:54:29 UTC

omg nooo I really wanted to write you a cliche high school plot (they're so much fun ;___;) but... for some reason... this is what came out instead u__u and LOL this cute follow up comment :') yes you do make sense!! I'm glad it worked for you, I was really taken with the idea of cliche high school graduation phrases and wanted to work it in somehow. Thank you again!!!

herocountry December 3 2013, 19:38:17 UTC

WHAT THE HELL

THIS IS SO CUTE

WHAT'S WRONG WITH YOU

preorder December 3 2013, 22:46:55 UTC

SCREAM WTF IS WRONG WITH YOU!!!!!!! why are you even here

just2wings December 7 2013, 05:09:10 UTC

I love your sense of humour; this was so funny and light but with just the right amount of emotion. I love the way you write your characters, too. You're seriously amazing.

preorder December 7 2013, 22:57:45 UTC

Ah you are too kind, thank you so much for this message!! ;; I'm really glad this worked for you!

bonbonyuri December 11 2013, 05:01:22 UTC

Oh this was really nice! You portrayed the feelings very well, it kinda reminded me of how I had felt when I graduated.
Thanks for writing this! I'm looking forward to reading the fic you prepared for December 23rd ^^

Have a nice day ~

preorder December 13 2013, 07:38:29 UTC

ahh thank you so much, I'm really glad you enjoyed this! :) I am slowly but surely (well, hopefully) making my way through the calendar, so I hope you won't have to wait too long for the 23rd! thank you for reading and commenting :)