fic: can't stay away

Dec 07, 2014 01:44

can't stay away
PG. Bobby/B.I. 5438 words. AO3 mirror.

Hanbin is mad at Bobby. It's not the end of the world, but it's not fun, either.

It's not as uncommon as the magic of Mnet editing would have one believe. )

pairing: bobby/b.i, fandom: ikon

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herocountry December 8 2014, 02:34:47 UTC
FIRST OFF WTF YOU'RE SO PRODUCTIVE second off omgggggg CLARE THIS IS PERFECT your bobby is SO good... YOU... ARE... THE PERFECT BOBBY...??? i'm serious i'm actually rly impressed by how thoroughly u nailed him, like from all his little mannerisms and descriptions: luxurious elbow room, using Hanbin's toothbrush, bracing his arm across b.i's thighs (heart beating faster), He grins when he accidentally-on-purpose knocks Donghyuk’s glasses off, making him jump. LMFAO Bobby Is An Asshole (stealing junhoe's food, this is why he hates u), being all "as if" he'd lose his ring, wiggling like a worm in jinhwan's lap... the trajectory of his emotions too, i feel like you've really captured his... spirit... .. wtf HOW DID U DO IT how did u understand so deeply... i love his flare of irritation, i love that he decides to just have fun with hanbin being mad at him, and then he suddenly sobers again bc it's not funny, his cartoon character lie.

it's not just bobby tho all your characters were soooOOO perf omg you describe b.i so well wtf :( the ( ... )

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preorder December 8 2014, 03:46:03 UTC
OMG WHY ARE YOU SO NICE TO ME //____\\ I feel embarrassed reading this nice comment about my underwhelming effort u____u wahh omg I'm so glad you liked bobby >__< I had someone else (HARD SINCE I ONLY HAVE 5 FRIENDS) read it over to tell me if he sounded ~right so I had a lot of help figuring him out u__u bobby's such a satisfying character to figure out in general u____u

predebut summations LMAO THEY'RE STILL PREDEBUT!!!! omg halfway through writing this I became a chanwoo stan... LOL JK but I did watch that testing-the-maknae clip a few times u__u

sobs thank you so much T_T ♥ this is the nicest comment T_T_T_T minotori I promise I won't forget you even after my masta wu and illionaire collabs T_T ♥

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fashcndy December 8 2014, 05:27:55 UTC
yassss, this bobby is the bobby. granted i've read all of 3 ikon fic, but still your characterization is arrow meets bullseye. like, you got the essence of bobby. none of that washed out or that otp projection thing. hmm, i can't really explain what i mean but yeah i loved this.

yas that ot3 game strong. jinhwan in this is everything i need. i need tiny hyung to keep bobb.i on the right path.

all the small things. i shall come back with something that makes sense bc it is of utmost importance that u understand i am 100% and 500 miles here for this fic and your writing.

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preorder December 9 2014, 01:17:14 UTC
wow thank you so much ;_; this is such a nice compliment, I'm so happy you thought my bobby rang true!! first fic in a new fandom is always nerve-wracking//I was worried I was just projecting onto him but I'm glad it worked for you!!!

and yessss I've never wanted an ot3 more than golden trio, I keep thinking I ship two of them more but then they do something out of left field and I know it's a Sign.

thank you for reading and leaving a comment!!! ^__^

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fashcndy December 9 2014, 01:34:57 UTC
its great. continue pls. on point characterization is everything to me. i'm prob gonna be reading this over and over and over.

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kyunqsoo December 8 2014, 14:59:33 UTC
aaah, this is amazing! i think i read it like, 4 times and i want to read it again otl i enjoyed this SO much! the characterisation and your writing and everything, really, everything is wonderful! it gives me hope for the future of this ficdom n___n
thank you so much for writing this!!! ♡ ♡ ♡

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preorder December 9 2014, 01:18:07 UTC
LOL omg please save yourself... there is no need to read it so many times u__u;; I'm so glad it worked for you!!! and yes keke I'm eagerly anticipating what else will come out of this fandom >:) thank you for reading!!

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modelpress December 9 2014, 23:32:41 UTC
WOW this was so good u_______u can i just say jinhwan was perfect in this 💕 but honestly all of the dynamics were so so so on point along with the characterizations (especially bobby omg this boy) thank u for writing ikon this ficdom really gotta grow!!!!!

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preorder December 10 2014, 03:27:27 UTC
ahhh thank you so much I'm so glad you enjoyed this!!!! I love jinhwan/golden trio dynamics, I hope to one day write a true ot3 >__< thank you again!!! pls also write for ikon :3

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idyleski December 10 2014, 04:14:00 UTC
omg i really liked this and found it so hanbin-like to fume in that way and for bobby to be sort of passive-aggressive while retaliating (the thing he said to dong in the practice room, honestly)

i especially liked the line bobby is ambitious, not selfish idk that really struck me as something that he is honestly. and it was such a good and cute fic gak

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preorder December 10 2014, 05:19:56 UTC
thank you >__< so happy you thought my hanbin and bobby rang true ;__; LMAO I love secret asshole bobby... if ur such a nice hyung why do so many ppl say they're awkward with you then huh!!! thank you again~ you're so kind~

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idyleski December 11 2014, 04:25:28 UTC
i especially loved hanbin's reaction to being kissed by bobby (because let's face it that is so him the child has no chill i swear.

secret asshole bobby my fave tbh

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