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The Paternal Catalyst 6

Jan 28, 2010 06:54

The Paternal Catalyst
Rating: PG
Word Count: Over 44,000 in all
Disclaimer: I own nothing you recognize except California. That I rule.
Spoilers: Up to the Maternal Congruence
Summary: Because of Penny's father, Penny finds herself hiding in the laundry room while Sheldon constructs a dating formula and Leonard performs human experiments.

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big bang theory, shenelope, fanfiction, the paternal catalyst

Comments 2

7gifts January 29 2010, 19:10:38 UTC

I hope I don't offend you by pointing out that jumping between prose and screen/transcript type writing is confusing. Keeping with the story's original prose style would have been better here. Irrespective, a pretty decent chapter. Sheldon and Bob, oh dear!

PS: Apologies in advance if any offence was caused.

preosmo January 30 2010, 11:31:24 UTC

Oh, no offense taken. Concrit =/= offense to me.

Yeah, I figured it might confuse. I wanted to have a different sort of writing style for each character, and to have them all together, to do a script type. I'm fairly sure it only happens one more time. Other than that, it jumps between Penny (1st person), Sheldon (letter-format) and Leonard (3rd person)