The Truth Of My Scars, Jared/Jensen, NC-17

Feb 20, 2008 22:08

Disclaimer: I own nothing, not even this prompt.
Author: prettifuls_pout
Title: The Truth of My Scars Part 5/?
Rating: NC-17 over all
Warnings: Slash! That meeeeans, male/male sex, mucho masturbation, and lots of kinkyness.
Genre: Romance, Angst, Comedy
Pairing(s): Jared Padalecki/Jensen Ackles, Christian Kane/Steve Carlson, Michael Rossenbaum/Tom ( Read more... )

slash, j2, michael rosenbaum, jensen ackles, tom welling, jared padalecki, au, swimmer verse

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deanshot February 21 2008, 14:17:41 UTC
Damn, there I was reading away and wham you hit me Mike and Tom having sex which made my jaw drop, this is a good thing it means I was totally surprised and then totally all hot inside.

The conversation between Jared and Jensen was so sad but it ended so well with Jared kissing Jensen.

I totally agree with Jensen, he's definately screwed and let's hope it's by the gorgeous Jared who made his lips tingle.

Looking forward to the next update.

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prettifuls_pout February 22 2008, 20:50:48 UTC
*snickers*
I'm always afraid of throwing sex into my stories cause I'm not positive about my writing level but I couldn't resist this lol
I loved the chemistry that kinda was bubbling in this chapter I must admit (:
More kissing and heavy fighting soon ^_^

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trueshellz February 21 2008, 18:05:03 UTC
j2 kiss
and tom and mikey smecks in the same one!
WOOT
xxx

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prettifuls_pout February 22 2008, 20:51:55 UTC
*chuckles*
I hoped you'd like the Tom and Mike (:
And more kissing, but not tooo to soon, they gotta work for it all *smiles*
<3

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prettifuls_pout February 22 2008, 20:53:51 UTC
For that sex scene, don't know why, but, 'Flash Dance,' came to my immediate mind o.O

Oooh your foreshadowing is impeccable :D

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prettifuls_pout February 22 2008, 21:04:50 UTC
Jared's definitely a big softy (:
And Jensen sneeking peeks at Jared in the car was kinda a cute image in my head ^_^
LoL can't forget the sex, clearly *laughs*
I'm hoping to have more soon but with me you never know *shrugs helplessly*
*hugs*

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fanofsuper February 21 2008, 23:15:59 UTC
Another great update.

It was good to hear some of Jared's past but it was so sad. I just want to give him a big hug.

By the way, I think you meant to say there was something wrong with the brakes.

Mike & Tom are great together.

Looking forward to the next update

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prettifuls_pout February 22 2008, 21:10:33 UTC
Awww feel free to hug the Paddybear (:

And lol I did mean that. Where'd you see the mistake? *squints and looks for it*

There'll be more Mike and Tom although probably less sex between the two of them later. One scenes enough for the time being *laughs*

I'll update asap.
<3

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fanofsuper February 23 2008, 22:54:33 UTC
*** Hugging the Paddybear ***

The mistake is in the paragraph when Jared mentions how his wife died:"Jared breathed out softly, sniffing the cool night air and taking in the near silence of Austin. “Car crash, actually. I was driving and -well something went wrong with the breaks. Shadow of some type of game startled me and I swerved. Car wrapped around a tree.” He swallowed and rolled his lips into his mouth, eyes glassy and red. “She died on the scene, my knee got impaled with the debris from the car and tree.”

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prettifuls_pout February 23 2008, 23:46:23 UTC
oh I gotcha.
I'll edit it in a few minutes
Thank you for picking that out, I'm a total idiot (:
*smishes* thanks hun <3

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