Fic: The Status Ailment Series, Part V

[pretty_racing]

Title:  The Status Ailment Series--In The Cerobi Steppes...
Pairing(s):  Balthier/Vaan
Rating:  PG-13ish...
Warnings:  Short!  slash, no spoilers
Summary:  Balthier is in a Bad Mood after The Incident and Penelo tries to fix his inattention...
Disclaimer:  I do not own the Characters of FFXII, Square Enix does, and neither am i trying to make a profit

Comments

[dreamsincyanide]

Whoa man. . .that was hot. . . o__o

And random LOL at the ending note. Vaan as seme? I'm more laughing at the mental image of that then disturbed by it. XD

[pretty_racing]

yeah, the last line was the first thing that i wrote for this one... XD

and i do laugh everytime i look at it, but still, Balthier as uke? o.O

[oceanicblue]

Lmao I could so see Penelo's face when she watched Balthier jump and attempt to "sex up" Vaan not like he was complaining... short but totally worth the wait. :D

thanks for reminding me that I need to get SOME balvaan before march ends...

[pretty_racing]

Like Vaan would complain XD Penelo was just trying to save her innocent eyes... ha. :3

[miscreant_13]

(That line about the quickening chains killed me with laughter. XD)

I'm really liking this series. <3 I read all five parts this morning and didn't regret it at all! :D

[pretty_racing]

gah! i'm glad you liked that line, i just have this image of Bal feeling up Vaan during Pyroclasm (or however its spelled) and the fire ball ends up setting a section of the forest on fire... XD *is a crackhead*

Glad you like the series!

[tempusbrevisest]

brilliant as always! good thing Basch wasn´t there to feel Balthier´s wrath, hahaha.

A Vaan/Balthier doujinshi?... wow.. that´s really weird, so wrong but I´d love to see it anyway T_T curiosity kills the cat or turns it into a yaoi fan XD

[pretty_racing]

your icon still kills me! XD

and it is weird... i'll try to post it some day...

[anonymous]

hahah I like the ending. XD