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Jul 23, 2009 01:37


There You Go. ||  jiyong/seungri  ||

Johnny Cash had always made Jiyong feel like drinking red wine and falling in love.

as if they were falling in love to the same beat... )

fic: jiyong/seungri

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mnol_heart July 23 2009, 03:06:11 UTC
aww this is super cuuute :D
i love themm. also johnny cash totally makes me want to drink red wine and fall in love too~

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pretty_yellow July 23 2009, 03:22:37 UTC
a~

he does, doesn't he? there's something about his voice that just makes me want to lie down in the dark and listen.

thank you!!

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wanielovesbb July 23 2009, 03:13:49 UTC
this is so awesome!! and sweet! xD
i love it how they flirt in the kitchen
oh and no sex after dinner?
well done!

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pretty_yellow July 23 2009, 03:23:55 UTC
haha. no sex after dinner. not yet at least. maybe they'll have to wait until the next birthday. /laughs.

thanks so much for your kind words!!

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veritas_vincit_ July 23 2009, 04:25:38 UTC
SPOT!

i'm stoked you've written something else

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veritas_vincit_ July 23 2009, 04:42:12 UTC

first off let me say: Johnny Cash is win, i'm so happy.

Seungri laughed and it was the prettiest thing in the room.
oh, this is so lovely. i really want someone to think that of me someday

“Like Taeyang’ll know what a loin is anyway.”
For some reason, i laughed really loud at this. probably because i get awkward when i think of YB is slashy situations and my brain is always on Slash!mode and loin.....well, yeah i'm sure you can figure it out.

"hey baby, wanna be my wife?"
YES! oh, you're talking to Seungri...I'll just...sit...over here. *runs*

“Sometimes I think you’ve gone mental and then you say something like that and I’m like, no, that’s just Jiyong.”
perfect description ever. and really true because i KNOW i've thought the same thing.

...Seungri listened to Jiyong’s heart through his shirt and the rat-tat-tat of a genius played long into the night.i don't know if Seungri is talking about Johnny Cash or Jiyong, and that's awesome. i mean, are they listening to Johnny Cash or is Seungri just pressed against Ji all night... ( ... )

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pretty_yellow July 23 2009, 12:13:15 UTC
o bloody hell. johnny cash is a genius. i'm so happy you agree.

a- i know what you mean~ /sighs.

b- haha! i hadn't even thought of the slashy-implications. /laughs. i'm glad you mentioned that. i'm giggling like an idiot right now.

c- with a few name changes i could make jiyong ask you to marry him. huh? huh?

d- i love that jiyong does whatever the fuck he wants. i think that would translate into things he says as well /laughs.

e- well. i was actually refering to mr. cash. but i can see how it could be read otherwise. either way. i quite like your interpretation actually!

<33

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veritas_vincit_ July 23 2009, 21:04:39 UTC
i would be VERY pleased if you could somehow persuade jiyong to propose. (i'm such a dork)

haha. MR CASH! you're pretty awesome.
i can't wait for your next story :)

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haelin July 23 2009, 04:29:20 UTC
spot for the deprived one..

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haelin August 1 2009, 05:39:37 UTC
it took me exactly 9 days before commenting.. SHEESH.. i'm sooo bad at spotting lately.. mianhae...

ANYWAYS, RI COOKING AND JIYONG HELPING! WAAAAAAAAAAH! THIS IS SOOOO ADORABLE I SERIOUSLY LOVE THE WAY YOU DESCRIBE HOW THEY PREPARED THE EMAL! AND JOHNNY CASH! (i remember watching the movie about him and i seriously love his songs over presley's i dunno why though)

YOU DON'T KNOW HOW MUCH THIS MADE ME SOOOO HAPPY! YOU DESERVE AN ALL CAPS COMMENT..=) CAPS IS LOVE!

SKDJFLDKFJLJF

*huggles*

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haelin August 1 2009, 05:41:31 UTC
i meant the meal.. sorry.. incoherent self commenting on your fic so some words are mixed up.. BUT STILL, LOVE THIS!

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pretty_yellow August 1 2009, 13:17:19 UTC
haha. i was wondering whether people'd think an entire plot consisting of them making one meal was dull. i'm so glad you enjoyed!

(i watched that movie recently myself. i quite enjoyed it.)

i'm so glad you enjoyed (nine days later or no /laughs) and that you took the time to review.

thank you! xx

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oxygenlove July 23 2009, 05:08:10 UTC
OMG SPOT. i'll just pause my 1TYM playlist....!!!!!! i think listening to 1TYM while reading this is NOT a good idea.

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oxygenlove July 23 2009, 05:46:38 UTC
wow. that was pretty much awesome.
it was sweet and cute and sensual.
it has just the right amount of giggles and just the right amount of "awwww~" and just the right amount of "damn it i need smut right now".

i really like how you described ri. really great description. :)

AND AND ADN!!!

“Sometimes I think you’ve gone mental and then you say something like that and I’m like, no, that’s just Jiyong.”

PERFECT LINE RIGHT HERE.

wonderful!~
glad to read more gri from you!!!~
reading your writing seriously makes me want to improve on mine. HAHA!~

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pretty_yellow July 23 2009, 12:15:22 UTC
wa~

i love the word sensual! /laughs.

i'm in love with the idea of seungri in an apron with flour on his cheeks. i don't know why...

AH! i'm so glad people liked that line!! it was one of my favourites also.

/blush. you are to nice to me!

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oxygenlove July 23 2009, 16:10:45 UTC
haha. you should write smut! ROFL. i'm being demanding. pardon me.
DAMN IT. IT must be that image of him in that light blue apron in their Always Showcase/ fanmeeting with JI's arms wrapped around his waist from behind... DAMN IT.
heheeee.... of course i am nice.... i love gri writerssss!~

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