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Aug 08, 2009 00:12


Step One || jiyong/taeyang/seungri ||

Because it's not that he hates Taeyang, it's that he hates Taeyang and Seungri.

mostly broken, mostly burnt )

fic: jiyong/taeyang/seungri

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minn_rox August 7 2009, 14:57:48 UTC
SPOT!!

i'll be back..too sleepy..

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minn_rox August 8 2009, 11:02:54 UTC
the emotions and feelings they shared for each other are complicated but at the same time, freaking AWESOME ( ... )

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pretty_yellow August 9 2009, 05:41:26 UTC
and i love you so fucking much for leaving such a wonderful review! thank you so much!

that was one of my favourite lines in the entire story so i'm so very, very happy that you mention it! /laughs. gosh. i'm really so glad someone commented on it. much love to you!

thank you <3

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aishiteru_amie August 7 2009, 14:58:39 UTC
i love this three people!!
i love seungri the most actually..
can i have a request too?
if it's occay then i will think about the plot i want first..
hehehehe~

you're really one of my favourite author!!
i love all your fics and it just send chilled all over me~
it is my favourite past-times to keep reading your fics all over again when i've nothing to do..
thanks again for this wonderful fic!!

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pretty_yellow August 7 2009, 15:08:17 UTC
i think seungri's my fav also /laughs. they're all just so perfect.

of course you can have a request, you can just leave it in a review here, or send me a message or whatever. i'll be happy to hear it!!

o blush! that's just so... i can't even speak. thank you so much! i'm so, so happy that someone cares that much about my writing. gosh. thank you, thank you!

i hope to write many more stories that you enjoy (and i'm eager to hear your request!)

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aishiteru_amie August 7 2009, 15:27:15 UTC
it seems maknae is everyone favourite~
hehehehe!
my fav seems to be Ri>Ji>Bae
but sometimes, i love Bae more than Ji!

i can!? yeay!!
i'll just send you a message later..
i already have few in my mind..
omo! is that too much?
hehehehe!
no worry dear, just write one will already makes me a very very happy person!!

i wish i could have even a bit of your talent in writing~
you and krizza really inspired me to write a good fics.
the words you used, it touch me deeply!
i should be thanking you for all that!!

i'll be waiting patiently for your fics then~
all the best in your writing!!

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pretty_yellow August 7 2009, 15:34:43 UTC
big bang = so much love <3 ~

send as many as you want! i'd love to have a choice and the more the merrier! /laughs. i can't wait to read them and have a go, i hope you'll enjoy the story whenever it comes.

bless~ your words are too kind. if i inspire you that's all i can ask for. thank you, thank you so much! <33

xx

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laure1724 August 7 2009, 15:47:09 UTC
this was beautifully written, i absolutely love it
i have a seungri bias and this just made my day =^^=

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pretty_yellow August 8 2009, 05:30:33 UTC
it's pretty impossible to not have a seungri bias, i think.

he's all kinds of perfect and more.

thank you!

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katherine_15 August 7 2009, 16:05:54 UTC
That was GORGEOUS. *breathes* Heartbreaking and touching... and just completely beautiful... Your Seungri can steal anyone's heart. *ADORES*

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pretty_yellow August 8 2009, 05:32:31 UTC
your seungri can steal anyone's heart.

o blush~ i'm so glad you said that. i loved writing his character throughout the entire fic. i have so much love for him /laughs.

thank you for your kind words. xx

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bluemonkiesx August 7 2009, 16:19:48 UTC
OT3<3
I will spot here and read when I get back from the optometrist.

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bluemonkiesx August 7 2009, 20:40:23 UTC
okay, first. I really love how this was a completely different love triangle. Instead of the usual seungriXjiyong w/jealous youngbae or seungriXyoungbae w/jealous jiyong, you literally made it into youngbaeXseungriXjiyong.
and the way you made it seem just so natural for seungri to love both of them, it was like it was just meant to be that way, no questions.

And I loved how you put Seunghyun and Daesung into the picture, and how at the end Seungri even put them into the future with them, because that's just the way Seungri is. He's open and inviting and full of love to give to everyone in this fic.

“But we’ll be there, us three. And I’ll kiss you and Taeyang all day. We’ll be perfect.”

“Perfect.”

“And maybe one day, you’ll kiss Taeyang.”

Jiyong is silent, watching the gentle rub of Taeyang’s hand against Seungri’s hip. “Maybe one day,” he answers, meeting Taeyang’s gaze with a moment’s pause.

Maybe one day soon.

okay, ignoring the last line of the story, do I see some GDYB there? totally not being GDYB bias here because, yeah ( ... )

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pretty_yellow August 8 2009, 05:40:09 UTC
it was like it was just meant to be that way, no questions.

/is content. i'm so glad i articulated that feeling. i was stressed that jiyong would be too whiny, taeyang would be too much out of the picture, seungri would be too one-sided (whether that be one-sided with ji or tae, i don't know.)

thank you for disagreeing!! /laughs.

and i'm glad you mention daesung and seunghyun. i thought the conversations with each were important turning-points in jiyong's character, points for him to talk about his relationship, to figure it out with words. i love that you mention them <3

it was! it was! it was a hint at future gdyb! haha. well done you~

the beach scene was my fav <33

(request me something, damn-it. i want to write you a story /laughs. or you know... don't?)

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bluemonkiesx August 8 2009, 19:49:49 UTC
YESSSS, I knew I spotted GDYB there<3 my GDYB-senses do not fail me. even if I may fail at writing them.

but yeah. The way you you made all of them interact with eachother...it just made sense. Like, Jiyong was being jsut the right amount of selfish with his whining, Youngbae was in the picture just enough, and Seungri (in my opinion) loved each of them in different ways, but in the same amount.

yeah, I really liked the conversations! it let the reader now how Jiyong falt about everything. and since Jiyong's mind can be a confusing place...those conversations were good. LOL.

I'm just a sucker for beach scenes<3

WAH! I will request something when my muse comes back D: I'm currently incapable of coming up with any kind of decent prompt. even for my own writing O.o gah, I fail.

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