I didn't want it to end. I was afraid to scroll down in fear of seeing a closing AN: but when I finally did reach that one little note, signifying the end of it, I wasn't sad, wasn't disappointed that it's finished, I was more like... contented.
I wanted to quote a lot of lines. I honestly wanted to. It's so hard to pick a favorite line. But I guess if I really have to choose one:
“Taeyang will be there as well. He’ll kiss me and you’ll watch.”This line right here, though not poetic like the different other lines that I wanted to quote, was just really powerful. This line made me realize early on in the fic that this story isn't average love, it's epic
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OMG. How can you write something that's GDYB, BAERI and GRI that is so AWESOME? OMG! I can't believe I am saying this. HAHA. I'm not really fond of gdyb and baeri couple but this one is beyond awesome! waaah! amazing!
while i was reading it, i needed to pause and this at what i was really reading. ahahaha. i love your writing style. i wasn't really sure at first if this was AU but yes! sorta highschool fic is love <3
i love how complicated their relationship is. goodness. i mean, taeyang love seungri. gd loves seungri. but seungri loves jiyong and taeyang! wow! nothing can be more complicated than that. usually, i'd be all "ehh...ahh..ehhh" about that kind of relationship, but you made it appear like it's the most natural... and PERFECT thing in the world.. I am seriously in love with the story. I might dream of this LOL. I am sleeping in a while ahahahaha. this will haunt me to sleep... in a good way though.
and this conversation IS the best part of the story:
“I love him, you know?” Taeyang says and it’s awkward and Jiyong
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i'm so glad that you gave it a try. even of you aren't a fan of the pairings <3 thank you for that.
but seungri loves jiyong and taeyang! i think that was my favourite aspect of the story, that seungri's heart is big enough for the two of them. i'm so glad you mention it in your review!!
wa~ i really enjoyed writing that scene, i enjoyed having them talk about their feelings and realise that however much they disliked it the other wasn't leaving. haha. i'm so very excited you liked it! <3
and about this fic you're talking about. i think i have an IDEA. XD hahahaaha. GD-RI-CL. jealous!angst with fluff? LOL. you get the drift? if you're interested, i can explain. hahahaha.
okay... there's this gd-cl thing going on right now. like CL was on GD's me2day, she was holding a white board that said "welcome to gd's me2day" and jiyong was there beside her. and from the last episode of 2ne1 tv, there were some gd-cl interaction. and and and Seungri is not happy. LOL. XD he is jealous of course. hahahaha. he doesn't want to but he is and it bothers him so much that gd notices it.
you can play with the story. that's just an idea. :D
alright. alright. that sounds perfect. i love me a jealous!ri as much as the next person /laughs. i can end it g-ri though, can't i? or at least with the taste of future!g-ri. sad endings make me sad. haha.
or do you want a sad ending? eh.
i'll have to brush up on my 2ne1 knowledge beforehand. i hate writing characters that are so far out of the ball-park of reality. when i feel i can write CL, i'll get on this, k? /smiles. youtube shall be my friend.
thank you so much for being lovely (and yes, you're icon pretty much wins at life. i'm sad 'cause it's cooler than i am /laughs.) xx
This fic is just...just...*____* I don't even know what to say. I just love the relationship between the three, and how it seems like there's nothing in the world but them and their love--especially with Seungri's dreams for the future. And I love the way you brought TOP and Daesung into their world, and how Seungri's idea changed with that. And then of course Jiyong's growth in character, and the development of his relationship with Taeyang. The last scene is especially..asljkfljf ;o; ♥ oh, and I absolutely adore your Seungri. X3
You write beautifully, and I would love to read more of your fics so would it be alright if I made a request? :3 I love how you wrote this AU with Seungri being a high school student, so now I'm curious as to how you would write a school AU with Big Bang~ either that or an AU (*ish in AU mood*) with something along the lines of "you fall in love with the person you least expect" for a concept. Main pairing G-Ri please~ ♥ But if you don't want to do them/don't have time you don't have to. ^^;
haha. i love seungri's dreams. how they're so grand yet... not. when you think about it, they're nothing. his life plan is to love, kinda. hope you understand my stupid tongue.
i really, really enjoyed writing seungri in this. i don't know. he was very free. simple to write, but so much more <33 thank you for your kind words!
thanks for the request! i'd love to have a try at that. i've always wanted to write a highschool-fic /laughs. i'm in a bit of an au-ish funk atm myself. haha. i'm doing two eng. lit. courses this semester so my reading list is mile high, but i'll defs make some time for this. i hope you enjoy it when it comes!!
exactly, it's like the idea of this great future filled with love and kisses, but in reality they'd just be staying in bed all day lol. but it's not stupid at all--it's a very..pure idea. Having nothing in the world to face and bring you down (like those responsibilities Jiyong learns to take). It's one of those pure, simple dreams that still hold a lot of meaning. Sorry if I'm not making sense, I'm really terrible with words. XD;;;
*nodsnods* the way you wrote him..I just really felt that he's this beautiful, gorgeous character, like the way the other members see him. And how other students call him "that weird one"--while he may be a little strange, that strangeness is captivating.
AU's are just so interesting ♥ I can't wait to read it. ^^ But schoolwork first of course, good luck with all your reading!
ya~ you're perfect with words. that's exactly what i wanted to portray. the everything and nothing and simplicity of seungri's dream. you got that! <3
how other students call him "that weird one"--while he may be a little strange, that strangeness is captivating. my happiness kills me! i wrote that little part with the other schoolkids 'cause i thought it explained so much about seungri's character. i'm so, so excited that you mentioed it!! thank you!
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It's perfect like that :)
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I wanted to quote a lot of lines. I honestly wanted to. It's so hard to pick a favorite line. But I guess if I really have to choose one:
“Taeyang will be there as well. He’ll kiss me and you’ll watch.”This line right here, though not poetic like the different other lines that I wanted to quote, was just really powerful. This line made me realize early on in the fic that this story isn't average love, it's epic ( ... )
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while i was reading it, i needed to pause and this at what i was really reading. ahahaha. i love your writing style. i wasn't really sure at first if this was AU but yes! sorta highschool fic is love <3
i love how complicated their relationship is. goodness. i mean, taeyang love seungri. gd loves seungri. but seungri loves jiyong and taeyang! wow! nothing can be more complicated than that. usually, i'd be all "ehh...ahh..ehhh" about that kind of relationship, but you made it appear like it's the most natural... and PERFECT thing in the world..
I am seriously in love with the story. I might dream of this LOL. I am sleeping in a while ahahahaha. this will haunt me to sleep... in a good way though.
and this conversation IS the best part of the story:
“I love him, you know?” Taeyang says and it’s awkward and Jiyong ( ... )
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but seungri loves jiyong and taeyang! i think that was my favourite aspect of the story, that seungri's heart is big enough for the two of them. i'm so glad you mention it in your review!!
wa~ i really enjoyed writing that scene, i enjoyed having them talk about their feelings and realise that however much they disliked it the other wasn't leaving. haha. i'm so very excited you liked it! <3
thank you so much for your lovely review xx
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i'll be happy to hear it!
(i think i stared at your icon for about five minuted before writing this response... not even kidding.)
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okay... there's this gd-cl thing going on right now. like CL was on GD's me2day, she was holding a white board that said "welcome to gd's me2day" and jiyong was there beside her. and from the last episode of 2ne1 tv, there were some gd-cl interaction. and and and Seungri is not happy. LOL. XD he is jealous of course. hahahaha. he doesn't want to but he is and it bothers him so much that gd notices it.
you can play with the story. that's just an idea. :D
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or do you want a sad ending? eh.
i'll have to brush up on my 2ne1 knowledge beforehand. i hate writing characters that are so far out of the ball-park of reality. when i feel i can write CL, i'll get on this, k? /smiles. youtube shall be my friend.
thank you so much for being lovely (and yes, you're icon pretty much wins at life. i'm sad 'cause it's cooler than i am /laughs.) xx
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i want to get into ur brain and see how it works so i can learn to write FUCKIN' BRILLIANT fics XD.
u always always ALWAYS leave me speechless!!!!
I LOVE U SFM
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haha. you're welcome to my brain. it's mostly just a fuck up of a thing though /laughs.
i'm so very glad you enjoy my writing, i hope i can post more stories in the future that you'll like!
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You write beautifully, and I would love to read more of your fics so would it be alright if I made a request? :3 I love how you wrote this AU with Seungri being a high school student, so now I'm curious as to how you would write a school AU with Big Bang~ either that or an AU (*ish in AU mood*) with something along the lines of "you fall in love with the person you least expect" for a concept. Main pairing G-Ri please~ ♥ But if you don't want to do them/don't have time you don't have to. ^^;
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i really, really enjoyed writing seungri in this. i don't know. he was very free. simple to write, but so much more <33 thank you for your kind words!
thanks for the request! i'd love to have a try at that. i've always wanted to write a highschool-fic /laughs. i'm in a bit of an au-ish funk atm myself. haha. i'm doing two eng. lit. courses this semester so my reading list is mile high, but i'll defs make some time for this. i hope you enjoy it when it comes!!
again, thank you~
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*nodsnods* the way you wrote him..I just really felt that he's this beautiful, gorgeous character, like the way the other members see him. And how other students call him "that weird one"--while he may be a little strange, that strangeness is captivating.
AU's are just so interesting ♥ I can't wait to read it. ^^ But schoolwork first of course, good luck with all your reading!
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how other students call him "that weird one"--while he may be a little strange, that strangeness is captivating. my happiness kills me! i wrote that little part with the other schoolkids 'cause i thought it explained so much about seungri's character. i'm so, so excited that you mentioed it!! thank you!
i hope you enjoy it when it arrives!!
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