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Jun 27, 2010 16:03


Men and War || jiyong/seungri ||

If you hadn't found me, I'm sure I would have found you.

where the bullet was that would eventually blast a hole through his cerebellum )

fic: jiyong/seungri

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myrobotvoice June 27 2010, 06:45:32 UTC
i have missed your writing SO SO SO much. i really have.

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pretty_yellow June 27 2010, 06:52:04 UTC
one of my new years resolutions was pack down and pull the good marks at uni. my free-time and writing somewhat suffered as a result...

i'm on holidays now so... perhaps?

thank you <3

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tees2mai June 27 2010, 07:59:13 UTC
SPOT!

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tees2mai June 27 2010, 17:30:26 UTC
I love history and I love wars. I enjoy reading about them even when they're depressing because there's something so captivating about the pain and torture of it all.

Do I sound like a sadistic person? :|

The boy is clean and innocent and covered in blood that isn’t Jiyong’s friends and for some reason that makes it alright.
I like how broken Jiyong was and how he tried to find solitude in Seungri.

And your Seungri, God I love him.

This just killed me:
“When, Jiyong? When was it that you sat beside a man and copied out his dying words to his oblivious wife and made sure to leave all his goddamned grammatical errors in so that when she read it she could pretend that he had written it and not worry about the fact that he had lost both arms in a land-mine assault?”
Those poor people. The trauma they go through day after day and they never recover from it.

I really like this fic :). I'm glad you're back.

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pretty_yellow June 27 2010, 17:42:12 UTC
i don't think it makes you a sadistic person... and i really don't buy that you study history so you can learn from it bullshit... i don't know why it's so interesting. to me or to you. but i don't think it's a bad thing that it is.

war. war is something... i can't describe what it means to my headspace and how much time i dedicate to it... trying to understand how anyone can go back to living in the world after they've suffering that hell...

i really hope this doesn't read like a pity-piece...

thank you xx

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oxygenlove June 27 2010, 08:39:11 UTC
OH MY GOODNESS.
I'm busy. I am.
But.

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pretty_yellow June 27 2010, 13:52:07 UTC
go about and finish your business! i'm sure bb-fiction can wait haha.

<3

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oxygenlove June 29 2010, 03:35:01 UTC
Okay, I'm pretty much done now. Just submitted my second draft. So I am re-reading this.

First time I read it, I looked like this -> -O.O-

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pretty_yellow June 29 2010, 08:03:46 UTC
i am a firm believer of education before fanfiction haha.

how are you going so far this year at uni?

xx

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aishiteru_amie June 27 2010, 09:40:54 UTC
you're back!!
i miss u so so so damn much!!
i just came back from my vacation too.
let me comment later!

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pretty_yellow June 27 2010, 13:46:01 UTC
i'm back. i am. hopefully for a while longer yet!

ooh vacation? i'm rather in need of one of those myself. i've just started my holidays from uni. i hope that lends more time to writing.

xx

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lilacblossoms June 27 2010, 09:57:54 UTC
You wrote something! Think I'm going to drag this happy event out by not reading until later. Then I can geek around today, grinning and knowing I have a treasure in my computer. XD

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lilacblossoms June 27 2010, 10:15:10 UTC
Couldn't stop myself from reading right away. So much for my discipline.

"When, Jiyong? When was it that you sat beside a man and copied out his dying words to his oblivious wife and made sure to leave all his goddamned grammatical errors in so that when she read it she could pretend that he had written it and not worry about the fact that he had lost both arms in a land-mine assault?"

That part really got to me. War is awful and terrible and all things bad and still there is so much of it. Never ending.

T_T

I love this fic and your writing. Reading about war makes my heart ache and I hope I will never live to see it happening up close.

Thank you.

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pretty_yellow June 27 2010, 10:46:40 UTC
i'm a history student. and i have such an interest in war. in all aspects of war. but my primary interest is in how one deals with reality once they've returned from hell.

i guess i wanted to try and explore that here...

thank you so much for your review! i'm glad you enjoyed it.

xx

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lilacblossoms June 27 2010, 10:57:05 UTC
I'm also a former history student. What studying history has made to me is to make me get a hint of how small out existence really is. So much have happened, so much will happen and the life we're living is really just a parenthesis in the big picture. Not that one necessarily need to go all depressed about that, it's more that it makes me enjoy life more since I feel that life is too short to wast on bad thoughts.

Alright, I'm rambling. Haha!

Good luck with your new years resolution btw. I should have promised myself something like that too. XD

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