[FIC] DAYTON iii

[prettylilagent]

Series Title: Dayton
Story Title: The Unraveling of Tightly Wound Beings
Author: prettylilagent
Pairing,Character(s): Will Schuester/Quinn Fabray
Rating: PG-13
Word Count: 6,486
Summary: The non-linear tale of one night in one city and the consequences that never seem to end.
Disclaimer: Glee doesn't belong to me, at all.
Spoilers: None

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Comments

[flareonfury]

Yet again - amazing job! I love how you write Quinn and Will and hope you make more. ♥

[prettylilagent]

OMG, thanks so much for commenting on all the sections and for saying such nice things! The biggest thing I'm worried about it that I'm not writing the characters well, so the fact you said what you did means the world to me!
I have a few things written and a few others I'm in the process of writing, so there will definitely be more posted soon!

[zotlot]

Yay for Quill! They're so well-characterised here, you need to write more!

[prettylilagent]

OMG, as I've said before, I've been so worried about the way I write the characters, so the fact you think they are well-characterized means SOOOO much!!!
I'll have more for you VERY soon!

[wistfulwatcher]

Wow. I'm never big on pregnancy fics, and usually very tentative about Quill in general (it may feel, just a bit, as though he's cheating on Rachel, hehe), but I absolutely love this fic! Your writing is so in character (in a relatively out-of-character premise), the plot and non-chronological style are both well thought out and captivating! I'm so glad for the references to High Society--such a phenomenal musical! And your use of graphics is very interesting, and really adds--you've chosen perfect ones (also, did you create them all? If so, it's not fair you're so multi-talented!). I really love your pacing, as well--the little hints as to how that first night happened are perfect to keep my attention but not give it all away. I look forward to more!

[prettylilagent]

Just... really? OMG, this is actually happening? I can't believe that you actually read this AND that you had such nice things to say. I'm just... I'm so happy right now! I am SO glad you liked it and I'm glad you're enjoying the disjointed narrative. I just feel like Quinn is so similar to Tracy Lord in High Society that I had to take that route, plus it gives some excellent songs to have people sing!
I did make the graphics, so thank you again! They're currently giving me nothing but problems, so your feedback is really the only reason I'm still trying to make them!

[wistfulwatcher]

Hehe, you are too sweet! Agreed on Quinn being so similar to Tracy (I just rewatched High Society last night and came here to see if you'd updated--soon, please?). I'm so glad you're incorporating the graphics--it's such a fun addition to an already great fic!

[psyko_kittie]

So late in reading, but great chapter. I'm really enjoying this story. :)