Hot

[prettysirenx]

Title: "Hot"
Author: prettysirenx/PrettySiren, etc
Rating: PG-13 (for language)
Genre: humor, romance, drabble, (kinda) smut, fluff 
Spoilers: None.
Disclaimer: I don't own Revolution. If I did, Charlie would get a new jacket.  
Warnings: This is Miles/Charlie. So, if you don't like the pairing, don't read. 
Author's Note: Unbeta'd. Came from a one-word prompt I left

Comments

*laughs*

[mustbethursday3]

I'm guessing the A&N conversation/bet went something like:

You know what, they've been alone... what? An hour? I bet they're naked.

Aaron...

No I'm serious. Naked. And I think Miles said there was a lake where we're meeting them. *pushes his glasses more firmly on his nose* They will be naked and wet, mark my words. One hundred bucks if I'm wrong.

*Nora stares at him, decides not to point out Miles and Charlie are related and offers her hand* Deal.
- - -

AM I CLOSE?

I love your dialogue. It just rolls - possibly the word I want is 'flows' - really well, and it's sharp and witty. Which is always a bonus.

I'm also sensing a theme -

Miles: LET US DEPART FROM OUR CLOTHES.
Charlie: ...THAT DOES SEEM LIKE A GOOD IDEA, NOW THAT I THINK ABOUT IT.

And I approve of this greatly. Srsly if this was a series about Aaron interrupting and Miles and Charlie taking off clothes - I can't imagine anything better (but maybe friday has fried my imagination)...ahem you know the next step would be taking off each other's clothes right?

She’d

Re: *laughs*

[refisher]

Hahahaha your analysis of Miles & Charlie, as well as your supplication of Aaron's argument, were spot on! These ficlets are so awesome.

She’d seen him shirtless, of course, but never pantsless. She wasn’t entirely sure he wore underwear, and had suspected for some time that he did not.
And I have been thinking this for some time, too.

“Five more minutes and you’d be wearing nothing at all.”
This i believe...of any character that spent enough alone time with Miles. Somehow the removal of clothing would just be the natural way to go.
I feel like this is a natural talent of Miles and part of why he is shippable with like... everyone.

Re: *laughs*

[prettysirenx]

There needs to be a crack series where Miles gets everyone naked through various means. I'm not volunteering myself. I respect all the other ships and get them, but Marlie is where I'm *at* right now; I need to stay in that groove.

Re: *laughs*

[refisher]

Don't worry. I'm sure by the end of this 4mo break, there will be a lot of crack fic out there!

I'm with you, though. Currently trying to channel the Marlie muse.

[refisher]

I love these fics of yours! Keep 'em coming please! :3

Pants probably meant nothing to him.
I don't know why, but I fucking loved this line. And I love your characterizations/dialog/interactions/awesomeness.

Sorry that that's not really constructive.

[prettysirenx]

I don't know why, but I fucking loved this line.

Thank you! I actually giggled when I wrote it. I loved it too. It just felt so *right*.

And I love your characterizations/dialog/interactions/awesomeness.

Thank you again!! I love this compliment, because as I writer, I firmly believe characters come first. You can have the best story idea, a readable style, etc...but if your characters suck, I'm not going to read them. And that's why I don't put out any characterizations that I wouldn't read myself. I only put out what I would want to read, because the characters are just so important, and I love TPTB have given us these wonderful little dollies to play with.