Diagnosis

Aug 24, 2010 21:18

Diagnosis
Pg; hyunseung/junhyung

Needed to write something to get out of writer's block.
This is probably going to be confusing, but if there's any question, ask away :)

you really know how to break a heart huh? )

genre: angst, pairing: junhyung/hyunseung

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theblackaffair August 25 2010, 08:10:29 UTC
Thanks! ♥

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yunsias August 24 2010, 18:09:42 UTC
I didn't really get the plot but oh gosh, your writing is amazing. I literally held my breath throughout reading (which is fortunate that it isn't that long); it's that ....breathtaking? (lol, for lack of a better word)

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theblackaffair August 25 2010, 08:11:13 UTC
If you don't understand it, you can ask me!
Thanks! ♥

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ashleydesuka August 24 2010, 20:24:46 UTC
Okay, where to start, because I don't even know.

You had me at hello, literally.
The distance was short, his words echoed around the house; like ghosts, haunting his faults and his sins. The more intimate words were bitten back; the one on the ground admiring the sound of a dead horse’s last sigh.

You write beautifully, but I'm sure you already know that.

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theblackaffair August 25 2010, 08:11:47 UTC
♥ ♥
Thanks! :D

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akinoyui August 25 2010, 09:28:15 UTC
omg..this is just too sad! from starting to the end, it's just beautiful. i can't even put it in proper words. I can just 'feel ' the pain .

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theblackaffair August 25 2010, 11:28:12 UTC
thank you! ;; ♥

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