I didn't really get the plot but oh gosh, your writing is amazing. I literally held my breath throughout reading (which is fortunate that it isn't that long); it's that ....breathtaking? (lol, for lack of a better word)
You had me at hello, literally. The distance was short, his words echoed around the house; like ghosts, haunting his faults and his sins. The more intimate words were bitten back; the one on the ground admiring the sound of a dead horse’s last sigh.
You write beautifully, but I'm sure you already know that.
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You had me at hello, literally.
The distance was short, his words echoed around the house; like ghosts, haunting his faults and his sins. The more intimate words were bitten back; the one on the ground admiring the sound of a dead horse’s last sigh.
You write beautifully, but I'm sure you already know that.
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Thanks! :D
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