This bonus bit is awesome. And this whole thing is awesome. I love how you guys collaborated, and I love just how... idek. Close and intimate and solid. So great :')
Oh, lord. This is all perfect, both the planned sections, and this...thing. Of course Tubby Tony and the Papaya would make terrible pop culture jokes about terribly out of date pop culture. And Leslie absolutely is a hurricane, regardless of whether the weather calls for her to be...
Great job on all the sections, though. This section really called for adorableness with a hint of anxiety, and I think you've both delivered it. And I appreciate Khaleesi references, of course, and the running thing that sharing a bed with Leslie is largely impossible.
Ahhh I finally finished reading BCD! And on such an excellent note :)
This collaboration was a lot of fun to read - I liked how you alternated scenes, it was something a bit different to what everyone else did and it's always fun to mix things up!
I really enjoyed all your scenes. In particular, the way they tried to make their last night together totally normal and non-momentous was really sweet and a bit sad, in a good way.
These sexy weather double-entendres are the icing on the delicious cake.
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LOL, at the texting because YES to misunderstandings or insecurities about what the other person means while texting!
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Thanks for the lovely comment!
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Great job on all the sections, though. This section really called for adorableness with a hint of anxiety, and I think you've both delivered it. And I appreciate Khaleesi references, of course, and the running thing that sharing a bed with Leslie is largely impossible.
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This collaboration was a lot of fun to read - I liked how you alternated scenes, it was something a bit different to what everyone else did and it's always fun to mix things up!
I really enjoyed all your scenes. In particular, the way they tried to make their last night together totally normal and non-momentous was really sweet and a bit sad, in a good way.
These sexy weather double-entendres are the icing on the delicious cake.
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