This was a funky thing to write (in parallel with the season as it was airing! original characters! Leslie and Ben spend very little time in the same room!), and possibly to read as well. I wrote an author's note which only a few will be interested in, here:
this just made me SO SO incredibly happy, AND we get a goat! i'm a grinning, giddy mess. (i'll post more coherent feedback later, this was my immediate reaction :))
I cannot believe how much I loved the way you finished this story up. Plus, more goat action!
I really enjoy how you used Leslie cleaning out her home to make space. I have a lot of Leslie inside of me, right down to the hoarder-in-training, and I can't imagine getting rid of my things unless it were for a good reason.
Love Ben's brother and sister-in-law making an appearance in the end of this story. I don't know if you did this intentionally or not, but it seemed to me like it was a transition from one part of Ben's family (biological) to another part of Ben's family (the one he chose).
Sidenote for craponaspatula: I really enjoy how you drew Ben's plaid on the ground. Also excellent choice in plaid.
Really excellent work all around. I might have to reread it from the beginning sometime soon.
See, I don't think it's open to much interpretation. On the right you can see Ben's shirt and tie (the same as he was wearing in the earlier art), so clearly they are underthings.
Comments 69
This was a funky thing to write (in parallel with the season as it was airing! original characters! Leslie and Ben spend very little time in the same room!), and possibly to read as well. I wrote an author's note which only a few will be interested in, here:
http://princess-george.livejournal.com/13002.html
Reply
(i'll post more coherent feedback later, this was my immediate reaction :))
Reply
Reply
Ron and Ann! I mean yes your Leslie and Ben are adorable but damn, I wish Ron and Ann could have been.
Reply
Reply
I am so sorry. I've just given myself nightmares about some bad Leslie/Ben fetishes.
Reply
(this is pretty much the funniest thing ever)
Reply
Reply
Reply
I cannot believe how much I loved the way you finished this story up. Plus, more goat action!
I really enjoy how you used Leslie cleaning out her home to make space. I have a lot of Leslie inside of me, right down to the hoarder-in-training, and I can't imagine getting rid of my things unless it were for a good reason.
Love Ben's brother and sister-in-law making an appearance in the end of this story. I don't know if you did this intentionally or not, but it seemed to me like it was a transition from one part of Ben's family (biological) to another part of Ben's family (the one he chose).
Sidenote for craponaspatula: I really enjoy how you drew Ben's plaid on the ground. Also excellent choice in plaid.
Really excellent work all around. I might have to reread it from the beginning sometime soon.
Reply
Reply
Reply
Reply
Leave a comment