Comments | princess_george: 10 Things About Ben and Leslie

princess_george

10 Things About Ben and Leslie

Aug 06, 2011 08:03

Rating: PG13

( Contrary to what some people might think, to Ben numbers aren't cut and dried or precise - that's the point, that's why they're interesting. )

leslie/ben

Comments 14

rikyl August 6 2011, 13:56:52 UTC

Number 2 is a work of art. I also love number 8, the bit about secrets being April's currency "even if she's more of a saver than a spender." And number 10 ... I wonder about that too. As amazing as she is, it seems like Leslie has some things left to learn about how city government works outside of her department.

rizzy360 August 6 2011, 16:10:34 UTC

I love #2 - it's so passionate that you'd think Ben Wyatt wrote it himself :)

And I also adore this line:
she makes some highly encouraging noises. He just wants to keep on making her make those noises, really, is what it comes down to.

sullen_aquarian August 8 2011, 22:00:25 UTC

2 is really in-depth, and gives me insight I never would have had into Ben otherwise. Really nice piece of mini-fic.

jncar August 6 2011, 16:14:30 UTC

number 2 is just perfect--it's like peering inside Ben's head and seeing what makes him tick. Wonderful insight, there.

And I like number 9, because even though Leslie talks big sometimes, I think deep down inside she's more realistic about things.

orphisme August 6 2011, 16:34:32 UTC

Number 2 is absolutely perfect. It is exactly the reason why Ben is one of my favorite TV characters. Incredibly keen insight on that one, and the rest of these. I also quite like #5 and #9. Great job, all around! You couldn't tell this was your first time writing at all.

spunkyar August 6 2011, 16:44:40 UTC

These are great. I love the idea of April knowing and helping them out. Good idea with the cube cutt scene!! :)

Also I loved seeing a look into their sex life. :)