Go Big, Go Home (#6a of probably 7?)

[princess_george]

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[craponaspatula]

Hee hee, I had to laugh about the "risque" designation. Because bare shoulders ARE crazy hot. Though they do look like they're going to have sex in 5 seconds.

Now I'm going to re-read yet again to see what changes you made and because I love this chapter so hard.

[princess_george]

Well, aside from the bare shoulders, their shirts are both untucked, and she's got her leg slung over his like that table is as good as a bed to her. And all the rumpled hair.

Plus: voyeurism. I mean, as you've drawn her, DONNA IS INTO IT.

[stillscape]

Donna is so a voyeur.

[princess_george]

She's probably liveblogging it all.

[stillscape]

I have nothing new to say as I am too distracted by the reunion, and all the making out. And by Orin. But mostly all the making out. Which is awesome. Ben's hair is awesome too. So is the making out. And Ann continuing to kick ass.

Did I mention the awesomeness of the reunion and the making out? No? Well, it was awesome.

[princess_george]

I'm not sure you mentioned the awesomeness. Could you mention the awesomeness? That would be awesome.

(Thanks for your help in making it more awesome.)

[sullen_aquarian]

I love every single person in this story. Ann may be my favorite, though.

[princess_george]

Ann's got it going ON, right?

[sullen_aquarian]

And I have to add that you write Ann and Tom in a way that makes me ship them. The show could learn some lessons.

[princess_george]

Haha. Really I am just making them, you know, talk to each other as if they don't despise each other and maybe kind of enjoy talking to each other. I'm truly not shipping them here. Just not giving them a chance to demonstrate contempt. Plus who wouldn't admire this Ann?

[isalsayourface]

The awesomeness of the making out (in words) and then the making out (in picture) is BLOWING MY MIND! Job well done, you two!

Also, I could totally see this type of reunion happening in an AU on the show, if they had waited to get back together until after the election. (Which I am SO glad they didn't because I would have died!)

[princess_george]

Thanks!

And yes, this fic has tortured them both for freaking ages. I have a whole timeline which is incredibly depressing to contemplate, really, because it's been so many months. We could not have watched a whole season of this, we'd have gone bananas.

[angelica_rules]

ohmygodohmygodohmygod! this is super adorable!!! i'd take this as head-canon if 'the smallest park' didn't happen! sooo cute! i love the way you both write leslie and bed (and everyone else), you just get their voice! and the illustrations!!! awesome! cannot wait to read the next part, this is such a huge cliffhanger!!

[princess_george]

Thanks so much! It won't be too long until the next chapter.

>leslie and bed (and everyone else)

Hah! Freudian typo!