Protection - Deleted Scene

Jan 05, 2010 12:40

This was the first scene in the next chapter, but turns out it doesn't really make sense and isn't really needed. You have to rewind things for this scene to happen, b/c I passed the point of Bill going home in the last scene of the previous chapter. A few things in here you will see again, but overall...it just seemed kind of redundant and long... ( Read more... )

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kgose January 6 2010, 05:01:27 UTC
Thanks for posting this outtake. Can't wait to read the actual chapter. Will that be posted soon?

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yiota_146 January 6 2010, 11:31:29 UTC
Hi, I must say if this is just a deleted scene, I can't wait for the whole chapter! I hope it's coming soon!

I've added you as a friend, and I would love it if you added me as well.

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quidditch3 January 7 2010, 03:37:27 UTC
Thank you so much for posting the deleted scene. Love reading it. You are a talented writer, I just think its wonderful. I love the details of Fleur and Bill together with their family. It such a tender moment. This scene gives you a window on how the family felt after Harry and Ginny's departure. It gives you a perspective of the family. I was glad to read about Ron and Hermione, especially Ron waking up. Hopefully the next chapter is coming soon.

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birlan January 8 2010, 01:32:20 UTC
its always good to read something by you. I like Fleur's perceptiveness and seeing what's really important.

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deleted scene cornishpixie65 March 23 2010, 19:53:37 UTC
Thanks for posting this. I've read your fanfics. Protection is one of my favs. Thanks for writing this. I keep checking for your next chapter. No pressure - good things take time. Good muses and writing muses are being sent your way.

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Re: deleted scene princessfics March 24 2010, 20:04:35 UTC
Thank you. :) I have my fingers crossed that I'm actually going to work out a lot of my problems this evening. I think I might have finally worked out my structure problem...but we will see. Figuring out how to organize the next couple of chapters has been horribly hard. But...maybe a light at the end of the tunnel finally.

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