Stalked (1/2)

Dec 17, 2010 02:58


Title: Stalked (1/2) 
Author: PI
Pairing: Jane Rizzoli/Maura Isles
Rating: NC-17
Summary: Maura has an unwelcome admirer
Disclaimer:  Mine? No, I just like to play. 
A/N: Grad school is literally killing my brain.

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rizzoli/isles, femslash

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art_and_lies84 December 18 2010, 03:40:21 UTC
I have to agree with heartsways: that line about the school science fair was so perfectly Maura. I'm jealous I didn't think of it.

I enjoyed your Jane as well. She conveys just the right amount of brash, idiotic arrogance that I love on the show.

Of course I am supremely disappointed that Frost walked in, but then again, a bit of waiting generally thickens the plot. Looking forward to the rest.

Also... Thank you for saving me from the loads and loads of TERRIBLE Rizzoli & Isles fic out there right now. It's refreshing to see an intelligent, interesting piece of work.

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princessitsy December 18 2010, 15:27:14 UTC
Thanks!

Jane is fun to write because she's a bit cocky.

The scene with Frost walking in is actually what started the whole fic in my head and whole pesky plot started to form around it.

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laurel_hardy December 18 2010, 05:23:57 UTC
Well, that's way better than Jane and Maura walking in on Frost and Korsak. I'm intrigued by Maura's most malevolent stalker and I'm hoping Jane gets to be the one to get him. It's personal, after all.

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princessitsy December 18 2010, 15:31:19 UTC
Thanks and eeeew for putting that image in my head.

The stalker will be taken care of, after some more tension of course (both sexual and non)!

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pocketnympho December 18 2010, 09:36:33 UTC
this is going to sound nerdy but....your useage of hebephrenia and schizoaffective disorder are incorrect. I'm a Pyschology major and it bugged me. lol

hebephrenia is irrational or silly emotionality and schizoaffective disorder is a fancy way of saying someone with schizophrenia also has a mood disorder.

I do love the story though. <3 Please don't hate me. I mean no harm. *hides*

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princessitsy December 18 2010, 15:34:44 UTC
It's the little things that get you, this is what I get for using wikipedia as a source. I'll fix it just for you!

I don't hate you!

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pocketnympho December 18 2010, 16:47:28 UTC
yeah, wikipedia is considered evil in the academic world. lol I live to inform others so they may spread knowledge as fast as people seem to spread stupidity! XD I may have to go tamper with wikipedia now that I know it is the souce of it. >.>

Yay for not hating me! Thanx for fixing it.

In the future you might want to use http://www.dsm5.org as a refernce site. It has all the current DSM-IV information as well as the information for the DSM-V set to be released in 2013. This is the actual DSM site by the American Pschiatric Association.

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ggdogsdottir December 19 2010, 10:13:32 UTC
Wonderfully written and funny as well. The plot is interesting and the personalities of the characters is fantastic. Great job and am looking forward to the next update.

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