Closer than Most Prologue

[princessme385]

Title: Closer than Most
Rating: M
Characters: Damon and Elena
Summary: Elena comes back to Mystic Falls after being compelled to stay away and meets the Salvatore brothers all over again.

A/N: Here is the first finished draft of Closer than Most. Let me know what you think or what you would change!

Comments

[amygerrard]

This is a really great chapter! I loved the DEx scene, it was perfect without having to be bery graphic. You captured the character's emotions really well, especially Damon's hesitancy of the whole situation. For some strange reason, I thought Damon would be the one to compel Elena so she could live a normal life so I was suprised that it was Stefan. The last scene was heartbreaking because Elena had finally made her choice between the brothers and then Stefan took that choice away from her. I'm really intrigued to see if the compulsion will change Elena's character at all, especially as the supernatural elements in her life had a huge impact on her. Once again, I love the concept of this story and I can't wait to read the next chapter! Amy x

[k_stjames]

Evil bastard. . .Stefan crossed such a major line that I can't wait until Damon gets his hands on him. How dare he? My heart is going to hurt for Damon because you know her leaving is going to kill him especially because he won't understand why. Hopefully everyone will be suspicious because she just wouldn't cut everyone out of her life. Can't wait to see where you go from here. Thanks for posting.