HONESTLY, this was really good, the whole water ghost supernatural aspect of it was so refreshing to read, and all the work you put into it ;A; ive seen on twitter is well well paid off, I really enjoyed reading this despite everything you've said ok!!! I liked how junmyeon worked into the plot as well; he wasn't a villain but like. complimented kyungsoo despite not working out as his boyfriend.
kai's character is so wonderful; so charming i wish he wasn't dead ;A; sigh. I found myself wishing he and kyungsoo had a way to be together ;A; oy. this was heartbreaking but kinda bittersweet bc kyungsoo realized in the end who he was :\ at least they got to spend that amount of time together...
<3 thanks for sharing this vangie :a; i do hope kaisoo tickles your writing muse in the future bc you do write them wonderfully
omfg crying because of the ending ;________________; why am i even crying, i knew all along that it's angst and that there wouldn't be a real happy ending or something like that, but still.. it was so beautiful yet heart-breaking at the same time... and still i'm crying because it was really touching when kai just disappeared from one second to another, and kyungsoo was left alone, just to find out later on that kai basically was his high school crush, or maybe something like his first love. they could've been together and lead a happy life it kai didn't have to die. and kai came back to him just to look after him, omg. that's just... so heart-breakingly beautiful
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believe it or not i actually also love you for writing this.
it's so beautiful, heart clinching yet somehow incredibly warming at the same time. it has such a kind of a modern-tragic-fairytale kind of feel and i enjoyed immensely. loved your wording and description and the slow break of the relationship between kyungsoo and joonmyun and how kyungsoo started drifting towards jongin. also the plot. ugh it's such a lovely plot and the little twist at the end kinda made me want to drown in tears but also made me want to drown in feelings so it's like a mixture of both. i loved the scene when they were in the sunflowers field. incredibly sweet and oh so heart breaking. really thank you for writing this.
also KAISOO + TRAGEDY = YESYEYSEYSYEYSEYS (i complain about it but i secretly love it tbh)
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kai's character is so wonderful; so charming i wish he wasn't dead ;A; sigh. I found myself wishing he and kyungsoo had a way to be together ;A; oy. this was heartbreaking but kinda bittersweet bc kyungsoo realized in the end who he was :\ at least they got to spend that amount of time together...
<3 thanks for sharing this vangie :a; i do hope kaisoo tickles your writing muse in the future bc you do write them wonderfully
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but why. why did he have to go. ;-;
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it's so beautiful, heart clinching yet somehow incredibly warming at the same time. it has such a kind of a modern-tragic-fairytale kind of feel and i enjoyed immensely. loved your wording and description and the slow break of the relationship between kyungsoo and joonmyun and how kyungsoo started drifting towards jongin. also the plot. ugh it's such a lovely plot and the little twist at the end kinda made me want to drown in tears but also made me want to drown in feelings so it's like a mixture of both. i loved the scene when they were in the sunflowers field. incredibly sweet and oh so heart breaking. really thank you for writing this.
also KAISOO + TRAGEDY = YESYEYSEYSYEYSEYS (i complain about it but i secretly love it tbh)
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