Comments | princofwhales: 250 // Home for the weekend, looking for a good time

princofwhales

250 // Home for the weekend, looking for a good time

Oct 01, 2009 23:28

Hey guys! I know it's been a while since I did a public post, but I swear, I have not disappeared.
I'm currently in my A.P. Studio Art class and it occurred to me that I could post my work on here and see what you guys think. It's a multimedia collage and it's been a work in progress for quite a while now. I'm planning on finishing it by the end ( Read more... )

public:graphics, public:art

Comments 4

dancingraphics October 1 2009, 20:56:32 UTC

OOooooh! AP work! *squee* So...

1. Breadth or Concentration?
2. Brilliant manipulation of texture. The texture variations add a whole new depth to the piece!
3. I especially love the tree trunk (OMG AWESOME) and the water.
4. The colors are also great, despite your concerns.
5. Maybe do something with the beachish area behind the tree. Where the beach meets the ocean (behind the tree) looks a little flat. Like the perspective might have gotten a little lost.

OVERALL, TOALLY AWESOME!

Now I need to go scan some of MY work so YOU can critique it!

theheartless69 October 1 2009, 23:02:03 UTC

Ugh, AP ART ate my soul last...last year. Maybe if you made more branches sticking out on the tree? The little boat is really cute, but it kind of blends in because it's all dark. IDK? Happy 3rd anniversary!

hpnarnia October 2 2009, 14:10:50 UTC

These are so cool, bbz. You're too good at this! :D

Wow, 3 years, ha? That's a very long time. Congrats.
Mine will be 3 years old this month, too!
*gives cupcakes*
Mmm, yummy! ^_^

ibelonginnarnia October 6 2009, 01:25:14 UTC

IMO? W-O-W. I still really like it! So much! ♥
I'm glad you're adding figures to the beach, it's what I'm feeling should go there.

LOL I knew you'd like Puck. Gooouda show.

OMG BB. 3 YEARS?! LET'S DANCE AND MAKE CUPCAKES.
AND RICE KRISPIES. With sprinkles, of course.