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Real Person // Keanu Reeves and Sandra Bullock // Hold On (Two)

Jun 20, 2007 11:54

Title: Hold On (Part Two)
Fandom: Real People
Characters: Keanu Reeves & Sandra Bullock
Prompt: 39. Burn
Rating: PG-13
Word Count: 2,971
Summary: Last night of Speed with Keanu.
Author's Note: Ah, I don't know them. This is just how I think it should be.

( I just love the way Keanu looks at me while he's kissing me. )

Comments 8

joannacullen June 20 2007, 17:58:58 UTC

“Sandy …” my name trickled off his lips as he leaned in, eyelids starting to fall, and it was all I could do to lift my face and meet him halfway.

It is a deep, terrible lie, but with the little red light glaring at her Sandra can’t say the truth. It was a rainy night in Australia, she and Keanu had come back from a whirlwind day of promoting, soaking wet with the memory burning inside them like a fire that wouldn’t die …

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Um, WOW. That's literally all I can think to say right now, WOW. Um...*thinks, trying to form coherent sentences* It was just so beautifully written, Katie! God, do I wish I could write like that! I love this idea of her telling the story, it's so great. It really was amazing.

moore_oaks June 21 2007, 20:21:00 UTC

Thank you!!! :D I was going to have Keanu tell it, but I feel like I've done too much K POV with these stories, so I did Sandra instead. And I'm really glad, because I think it turned out way better, with a fresh view.

belelmo27cien June 20 2007, 18:04:34 UTC

Amazed. Just amazed. Great great work. Sounds so real. See, I can't even write a proper sentence! If you make us wait for a long time, I'll call you a torturer!

Thanks katie!

moore_oaks June 21 2007, 20:21:29 UTC

Thank you!! I will try to write the next story soon. :D

sandykeanufan June 20 2007, 23:11:58 UTC

i'm such a sorry sap , here I am reading your fic while eating ice cream :) I bow again to you Katie, that was marvelously done. Words can't even express how heart breaking that was. Oh also I have to say that was HOT too, thank goodness for the ice cream, definitely helped me cool my body temp a bit :)

Is this the last intsllment? Oy see , you've turned me into this Keandra fic addict lol.

I really admire how you create your sentences. I felt the emotions in those words and that's why I'll always cherish reading your fics for years to come :) Hope you write more Katie, it's a crime against humanity if you don't. Hugs to you !

moore_oaks June 21 2007, 20:24:59 UTC

Aw, thank you!! :D

No, this is definitely NOT the last installment for this series. We are only at Speed, we have a looonnnggg way to go!! (At least three more stories, I am thinking.)

cecism June 21 2007, 00:44:45 UTC

Must you leave us hanging there? Oh, fine then.

Um. *tries to form some sort of comprehensible sentence* This was just beautiful. The tos and fros between Alex and Sandy, and her memory, were perfectly timed and really threw me back to that era in the 90's. I've always wanted to be a fly on the wall with Keanu and Sandra, but this was pretty much it, and so them.

moore_oaks June 21 2007, 20:25:41 UTC

Eep. *giggles*

Thank you. :D