castling

[privatexenemy]

Genre: fanfiction (Death Note)
Rated: G
Started: 11.08.2006
Ended: 14.08.2006
Author's Note: Short story written for Linda, unlearned. This is my first Death Note fanfiction, so it took me a while to figure out how I wanted to portray the characters and take the story

Comments

[k_a_s_h_k_a]

moo, L lost? ^^'
that was a very intewresting piece, even if i don`t play chess :P showed the chemistry between the two of them.
^__^

This match was his.
yep, and unfortunately not only this >_>

(can`t help it, i liked L more ^^;)

[privatexenemy]

Thanks for reading. Personally, I'm a L fan.. but for some reason, it would seem unsatisfatory if he won. ^^;

[aoi_aka]

It is worthy! You got them both right on the spot down to Raito's silent smirk. That boy smirks too much. Hopefully you'll continue to write more Death Note (not a request but a suggestion).

[privatexenemy]

Thanks for reading again! Yeah, I plan on writing Death Note when I understand the characters more. :)

[unlearned]

Ooooh man. ♥ I love the tension in this and all the parallels to the Kira case, and how L & Light keep going back & forth and trying to outmanuveur each other and Light winning in the end. Also, your consistant detail and really sharp, clean narrative and the chocolate koala bear cookies, haha best thing ever. 8D THANK YOU you're awesome. ♥

[privatexenemy]

♥ Yay! I'm glad you liked it a lot. :) I wanted to make it good because all those drabbles you wrote for me just blew me away. :O Can't have L without his junk food. Did you have those cookies when you were little? :O Glad you like your 'back to school gift'!

[sleepish]

[wrong journal, shh]

^^ ♥ Koala cookies are way cute. I had strawberry ones, too. & AUUUGH, back to school. Don't remind me. ;;

[privatexenemy]

... it's our little secret. xD

yeah. xD. whenever we went to hk, my bobo would buy us each a 10 pack thing. needless to say, my sister often ate all of mine. D: